Reviews for A Stormy Arrival
DavidAlatriste chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Awwwww, so sweet!
theybecameanimagi chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Awwww, this was cute! I enjoyed it!
I liked you had Ikki there, that was a cute touch, including one of the airbabies.
Hmm, ways you could improve... Instead of doing the whole *flashblack* thing to indicate you're using a flashback, you could just include the parts that take place in the past in italics. Also, you could indicate scene breaks with centered hashtags instead of a bunch of asterisks.
Anyway, good story! The part with Senna yelling at Tonraq made me laugh. :D
Blackford chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
This is great! I love the history you have written here about Senna and Tonraq and the birth of Korra. And I love how the airbender kids think of Senna as an aunt. It's very adorable.
Nagarox1234 chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Aww, so cute!
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
This is great! I love it! :D Rock on!
JockoRivera chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
aw cute story.