Reviews for The Sister She Always Wanted
Salanna chapter 20 . 12/28/2024
My younger son is born on 15 March, but in my defence one cannot really choose the day one’s children are born
Salanna chapter 15 . 12/28/2024
Re. errors - Mr Darcy would never address his housekeeper by her first name, nor would she address him as William regardless how familiar they are with each other
Guest chapter 20 . 11/14/2024
Personally I think that the obvious choice for Wickham would be to make sure he fell into the hands of a navy press gang; once aboard ship he wouldn't come back until discharged and that might very well take years (attempting to desert was punishable by being flogged to death).
Guest chapter 8 . 9/26/2024
Transferring Wickham to another regiment is a good idea but impressment into the Navy would be an even better one.
sandysan2013 chapter 34 . 9/10/2024
In every scenario Mr Bennett underestimates the vile undercurrent in Lydia’s character. He would be better to spend the months until the wedding getting to know his youngest daughter.
Jansfamily4 chapter 13 . 6/27/2024
What a good big sister she is.
Sekhmet.g chapter 39 . 6/22/2024
Me ha encantado tu versión, gracias!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2024
Hmm, you’ve made Mrs Reynolds far too familiar in her dealings and thoughts of Georgiana.

Also, you’ve made Mrs Gardiner far too low to ever be received at Pemberley by Darcy or Elizabeth if they married. A friend and godparent of the housekeeper and her grandson? Impossible.
Guest chapter 39 . 4/23/2024
All in all a good story. Hope you write a sequel minus Lydia Wickham.
Guest chapter 36 . 4/23/2024
Good riddance to Lydia.
Guest chapter 34 . 4/23/2024
Mr Bennett is still a dumb ass when it comes to Lydia, willing to shift his responsibility of her to someone else
Guest chapter 32 . 4/23/2024
It's good that both Darcy and Elizabeth decided not to share their news at the parsonage. Charlotte cannot be trusted to not share the news with either her husband or mother
Guest chapter 32 . 4/23/2024
Seeing as Darcy is already 8 and 20yrs, he should have been given the Fitzwilliam Family Talk years before
Guest chapter 26 . 4/23/2024
When Darcy addresses the Colonel he calls him Fitzwilliam, not Richard.
When Georgiana addresses Darcy she calls him Fitzwilliam SEE THE CONFUSION
Guest chapter 26 . 4/23/2024
Since when does Darcy worry about society when he and Georgiana prefer Pemberley over London therefore the view he held was contradictory
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