Reviews for The Sister She Always Wanted |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My younger son is born on 15 March, but in my defence one cannot really choose the day one’s children are born |
![]() ![]() ![]() Re. errors - Mr Darcy would never address his housekeeper by her first name, nor would she address him as William regardless how familiar they are with each other |
![]() ![]() Personally I think that the obvious choice for Wickham would be to make sure he fell into the hands of a navy press gang; once aboard ship he wouldn't come back until discharged and that might very well take years (attempting to desert was punishable by being flogged to death). |
![]() ![]() Transferring Wickham to another regiment is a good idea but impressment into the Navy would be an even better one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In every scenario Mr Bennett underestimates the vile undercurrent in Lydia’s character. He would be better to spend the months until the wedding getting to know his youngest daughter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a good big sister she is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me ha encantado tu versión, gracias! |
![]() ![]() Hmm, you’ve made Mrs Reynolds far too familiar in her dealings and thoughts of Georgiana. Also, you’ve made Mrs Gardiner far too low to ever be received at Pemberley by Darcy or Elizabeth if they married. A friend and godparent of the housekeeper and her grandson? Impossible. |
![]() ![]() All in all a good story. Hope you write a sequel minus Lydia Wickham. |
![]() ![]() Good riddance to Lydia. |
![]() ![]() Mr Bennett is still a dumb ass when it comes to Lydia, willing to shift his responsibility of her to someone else |
![]() ![]() It's good that both Darcy and Elizabeth decided not to share their news at the parsonage. Charlotte cannot be trusted to not share the news with either her husband or mother |
![]() ![]() Seeing as Darcy is already 8 and 20yrs, he should have been given the Fitzwilliam Family Talk years before |
![]() ![]() When Darcy addresses the Colonel he calls him Fitzwilliam, not Richard. When Georgiana addresses Darcy she calls him Fitzwilliam SEE THE CONFUSION |
![]() ![]() Since when does Darcy worry about society when he and Georgiana prefer Pemberley over London therefore the view he held was contradictory |