|Reviews for Tearfull Trials Along the Tracks|
| MorgothII chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
| ODST110 chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
that got um. . . dark, towards the end.
the funny thing is though that that reminds me of the breakfast club when the one guy talks about him getting a cigar burn for spilling paint.
pretty good story, a couple of spelling problems though. towards the middle, you typed "Rubies" instead of "Ruby's" which to be honest is a fair enough mistake. and just some minors one, really well done, i am interested in what you may create in the future, this being your first fanfiction.