|Reviews for His Draught of Delicate Poison|
| Emra3 chapter 30 . 9/19
This was really beautifully written. There were just two things that I didn't particularly get on with. When Severus and Hermione finally get engaged ( I loved how you did that), the only thing they seem to care about when they get married is being able to sex. They dont talk about any other amazing points about being married but just to finally 'have each other'. There is also a massive contradiction with Snape. Again when they get engaged they cant keep their hands off each other. Snape keeps saying how he doesn't want to have sex before marriage because he wants to honour his wife but he keeps on touching her in such a way that they are very nearly doing so. I love Snapes attitudes throughout but his total contradiction of himself really annoyed me. Anyway absolutely loved it. Stormy was such a cute character
| RAWRcarrie chapter 24 . 8/2
As I draw to the end of this end of this story I remain quite impressed. You have written a completely ludicrous and unrealistic AU type story that has come together quite nicely how I'm sure you intended. I like how well you've struck to this old era theme with a nice modern twist that I'm quite enjoying.
I am glad that Fleur stopped acting like a major C word and is at least trying to make Snape happy though I know they won't remain together a this is HG/SS, she was quite annoying in the beginning. (And quite perfect for Percy, I'm guessing that's who she'll end up with?)
I am really incredibly saddened by the death of Lucius Malfoy, I secretly hoped he would win Soph's heart in the end(nothing against Sirius) And even more deeply saddened that he died before coming to terms with Draco's engagement to Luna and making up with his son, though I applaud you for allowing him a heroes death.
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/12
I enjoyed this story and read it all the way through. But i feel like the power imbalance beyween them isn't always addressed, and there is a sense of snape objectifying hermione sometimes for me. Just a thought for any future fics x
| Blue night fairy chapter 30 . 6/10
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading this, this story is very well written.
I notice that this story is finished, but you have yet to mark it as complete. So is there more chapters or did you forget to change the status of the story.
Keep writing and I look forward to your next story.
| HeatherA9 chapter 26 . 5/20
Ha! The Grand Sophy "chase" scene has always been one of my favorites. It is funny to see it adapted to the Harry Potter world.
| Xiaou Nem chapter 30 . 4/23
This was a nice story!
| adara1103 chapter 30 . 3/29
I absolutely loved this story. I cannot wait to read what else you have written.
| fynnsmom chapter 27 . 3/14
This almost too romantic for words but I'm so glad that you used your words to describe it. I love it when Severus is possessive. I'm really enjoying your new story too.
| fynnsmom chapter 26 . 2/21
It's too bad Percy wasn't interested in Muggle things like his father. He could have used an umbrella.
| fynnsmom chapter 25 . 2/18
I've read this story before and I finally caught on to the Healer's name, Douglas Howser. I can't get over ho many people are pushing Severus and Hermione together.
| fynnsmom chapter 24 . 2/18
You just have to love Nanny. She's very tricky. Severus is very lucky to have Nanny on his and Hermione's side. I'm not sure how I feel about the possible relationship between Percy and Fleur. At least that would get them both out of the way.
| fynnsmom chapter 23 . 2/12
I think this is certainly one of my favorite chapters in this story and likely one of my favorite chapters of all time. The thought of Lucius sending out Unforgiveables and not caring which of the Death Eaters he was cursing. Then, Hermione running out to protect Severus while wearing her bunny slippers. Amazing! Finally Harry shows up and they realize the fight is over. I think the extra time you guys spent on this battle scene was well worth it.
| Fynnsmom chapter 22 . 12/23/2014
How funny to think that the Death Eaters plan to use Fleur to bring Severus out into the open. Their intelligence is not good if they hink that will work. Come to think of it, though, I'm not sure Severus even knows that he dislikes Fleur.
| Grace5231973 chapter 30 . 12/16/2014
I loved this chapter as much as I had when I read it the first time! I am glad you brought this story back! It is a classic!
| Sassyluv chapter 30 . 12/15/2014
OMGosh i can't believe it's done!
Well done, first for keeping the interest, second for keeping up the awesome story and third for keeping the style and writing amazing :)
Thank you so much for sharing, i can't wait to read something else from you!