Wow, 20/10

Wow friend, this is the best thing I've read on ff

Wow, this is perfect.

The end kinda made me feel like it is rushed probably because it is hard to make elements kill god in Naruto

It shouldn't even be possible for Narutos family to be killed by one of 9 fodder no name ninja. He can move fast enough that even hashirama and Madara can't keep track of him but when it comes to protecting his 2nd family he's ever had hes slow enough for these no name ninja to kill them. Like 20 times in the story he's moved fast enough to decapitate people and cut down trees without anyone even knowing said person/object was cut to begin with, this is just a stupid development

It dosentame sense why Naruto is against freeing the biju without killing their host. He's been apathetic at best to humans throughout the entire story, he only really cares about his descendants and students and the biju. Killing some random guy who your nephew got shoved into seems entirely in character for this Naruto, it only actually makes sense he dosent kill mito since she's a descent and he knows her

I’ll admit I find the concept of a story that takes place over 3000 years changing almost none of canon is disappointing, but there are some really nice moments: the beginning was great, I really liked Tsunade’s arc, and the Namikaze family was nice as well.

Ofc the only meaningful change to canon Naruto caused didn't even matter atleast he saved Uzu tho

Family always comes first unless that family has a cage bird seal on their forehead then you can just leave them to suffer

Rofl. Finally hit the part that can't be explained away. You just trashed your story to add plot. Good job.

An Indian uploaded this as a story(with episodes) and he didn't even give credits.
Channel Name: Sora Senju.

Actually I would say this story is relatively bad, would give it a 3.5/10 for plot induced stupidity, forced canon events in what should be a very canon divergent fic and overall lack of flavour.

The main negative is the MC, he has flip flop morals and that he barely impacts the overall canon plot that the author seems to force, despite saying/‘trying’ not to.

Doesn’t help the writing is average too, the Author Note explaining the difference between Red/Read in the middle of the chapter is completely unnecessary.

A lot of things to improve on.

This Naruto is too OP for a 478k story with events as close to canon as this. I agree with the other reviewers, he should have just unsealed the Biju after Hashirama sealed them, he is 3k years old and the death of a few humans to rescue his brothers ‘children’ would hardly phase him.

The were some overly dramatic played out scenes/humor for example Kaguya cartoonishly punishing Naruto every time he was experimenting with Chakra at the start, it was alright the first time but just dragged on. You would think after his brother died from Biju chakra withdrawal, Naruto being the Fuinjutsu and Healing master he is would be able to unseal Biju from people safely anyway

The overall tone of the story lacked flavour, it never really got exciting(I read up until chapter 7 and skim read the rest) and overall quite basic with too much forced drama as other reviewers say.

Naruto in this should have easily been able to take on Hashirama and Madara at the same time, he has literally been training for 3000 years and the son of a ‘God’ with near beyond ridiculous chakra and mastery of all elements. Any loss to anyone in this fic unless very well written has to be plot driven, unless Boruto characters start to pop up.

Your Naruto is too forgiving and compromises morals ridiculously at times.

Story is not bad, I would say slightly above average with a lot of room for improvement, best of luck for future writing.

Love the story, such a unique one of a kind idea. Don't know how this idea came to you. But I'm glad it did

didnt danzo died? he was the one to want him to kill his clan, stop taking things out of your ass just to bash a character