Reviews for A Brother
Xenove chapter 34 . 11/4/2018
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Hmason chapter 14 . 9/13/2018
soooooooo he can kill hundreds of shinobi in seconds buuuuuuut 9 takes long enough for 1 to slip past murder his wife and then his children disappear for 20 kilometres? bullshit
Hmason chapter 13 . 9/13/2018
i get that it's to move the plot along and explain why all 3 of the Sannin know fuinjutsu but still kinda made Naruto a bit of a bitch letting them TELL him what to do
PrintedSnail11 chapter 35 . 9/3/2018
Hey man this has been a really great story and a fun read, it's a shame Konan didn't get a chance to have an arc with her father.
Hmason chapter 10 . 8/30/2018
you would think after 3 THOUSAND years Naruto would see that EVERY time his family tries "peace" it ONLY makes things worse, Kaguya took chakra to make peace and she created the Juubi, Hagoromo gave chakra to everyone and that created the clan wars and now Naruto has trained Hashirama and Madara and that has created the shinobi villages or as i call it the biiju wars, seriously this passive bullshit only makes it worse, Humanity is an alcoholic swimming in liquor eventually they are going to drink they can't help it, Humanity NEEDS an ultimatum,
do what you are told
or die
Hmason chapter 5 . 8/29/2018
was really sad about Kaguya she is one of my favourite characters
mateeushoffman chapter 7 . 8/28/2018
a godlike person with millennia of experience had trouble fighting the reincarnation of his brother's kids. obviously, you did that so we can keep with the plot somehow, but that was almost unbelievable, as if Madara fighting with 2 jounin, and having hard times.
Guest chapter 35 . 8/10/2018
I gotta say, this novel’s end felt like the wrong stop.
Monster King chapter 35 . 8/6/2018
Great story please continue it soon.
Drake Cross15 chapter 35 . 8/3/2018
Amazing story I just finished it. One of the best stories I read.
CountOrlok777 chapter 1 . 7/22/2018
So you are the original author. some guy was posting this on wattpad and claiming it as his own. I want to thank you for giving us a great story.
Guest chapter 19 . 6/26/2018
When you wonder why an awesome concept doesn't have the necessary views. Then notice why. How are you 3000 years old and getting played by everybody you know lol. Just another koniha wank
PointlessSanity chapter 18 . 6/14/2018
Ilove this.

You make Immortality/Non-Ageing seem like a curse (Which it is) instead of what most fanfics do and make it seem like a 'Dream' Come true.
MistressofFiction chapter 35 . 6/13/2018
Enjoyed the story over all. the ending was eh, but there's parts that make up for it
Impressed chapter 35 . 5/29/2018
I really enjoyed this story. What a great reimagining of the original source. Reccommended highly.
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