Reviews for A Brother |
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![]() ![]() Garbage shitfest of a fight, Naruto should've easily roflstomped both of them within a second, as he never stopped training. Then having him abandon his path towards peace for someone that may as well have been a stranger, fuck that. Dropped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would of liked a bigger reveal noone ever found out who he was would of liked for more ppl to see kaguya and hear her talking to Naruto and their reactions felt rushed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto not only caving in to Harishama's beliefs but even tightening the seal and betraying his own set of rules..that is just so fucking far-fetched and out of character. |
![]() ![]() Every time that someone ask something from naruto he caves in easily. It is so fucked up |
![]() ![]() Naruto focuses more on the part where he must help all the person that he encounters yet he can't even help and find all the biju. What a lousy part of the story author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() driving me nuts how incompetent naruto seems to be... but otherwise, amazing story! thank youu |
![]() ![]() Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooo... Naruto is just gonna cave everrrry time wants to call in a favor that's kinda getting annoying.. Tobirama did the same thing and won the because of it... Is no one going to solve their own problems? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto's getting really sloppy. And foolish! Is this the effects of old age? This is stupid... He is stupid! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, you should just give naruto the tenseigan like for homura. Then all this confusion with the hyuuga clan will be stopped. I think its a better version of the byakugan. And it also comes with an iris so no need for genjutsu anymore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is literally the best Naruto Fanfiction I have ever read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was interesting, but would have been better if kaguya lived |
![]() ![]() That ending was so dope. Great read, OP Naruto, much enjoyed. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing read! That Hashirama fight, a masterpiece! One of the best fights I read here. Really brought his mentality and strength to light... And that madara appearence at the end was a great bonus! Gonna treat it as cannon lol On a side note, the wave fight vs the cannon fodder was too drawn out, you could have cut it and skipped a bit on the details and it would have not been a great loss. His conflict between between involvement or not is something that really made this fic what it is. I agree that sometimes it contradicted itself a bit (as you said in the notes), and perhaps it could have been written better, but the contradictions is what makes us human I guess lol. Would have liked it if he said goodbye to tsunade as well before he left. The ending as well, very fitting in a way. Frankly, I expected him to die, but the twist was an interesting twist. An open ending, fitting in a way. Would have liked to hear a last thought on his awaiting family or something like that, some closure in his life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meh. Couldve been better, but overall it was an okay read. |