like he can call someone else "psychopath" if he slaughtered a whole country

she never used kuramas power for anything so I don't think her rank should change that much

I can say: they intermarried civilians in konoha

so actually the clan didn't died out

didnt black zetsu died?

why would naruto hide his abilities if hiruzen is one of his precious people? the math aint mathing

wtf

this naruto is the most useless character I have seen in awhile

if zetsu dont exist here and didnt messed with the uchiha tablet then madara would never rebel against konoha

What is the point of having the MC an overpowered being who cares about his family before his ambitions, and suddenly have him betray his nephews and nieces. This fanfic is dumb.

Okay…that chapter was so obvious. His family were clearly going to die just so the plot continues. I’m guessing Minato and Konan survives.

I’m also guessing you encountered the issue that Naruto is too powerful so the only way for there to be a plot is for him to just suddenly lose his family despite him fully capable of ending the enemies quickly to prevent any threat

i'm disappointed that naruto didn't just kill hashirama, for breaking his rule and let mito die for trying to enslave a biju. I also expected naruto to go on a rampage and free every biju. i mean he has noone left except the bijuus and now they too got captured

Naruto is pretty much a God but why is the story still going through the same path as the canon? This is actually the first time Naruto was able to interact to the story besides being a background character.

I love your story brother, I really loved it, although I would have liked to read what happened after the final battle, as an epilogue chapter.

Leaving that aside, I want to thank you for the good times I spent reading "The Story of a Brother."

Kind regards Nagato-Senju.

Your story is really good but you make the paragraphs to long sometimes.

bastard. broke her heart. but I get it