Reviews for Princess of Konoha
Guest chapter 6 . 10/28
Oh and before someone says he was in love with sakura for no reason, he just wanted to help a fellow outcast, which she was for her forehead initially, and this developed into a crush and when he finally got in a team with her it became a full blown love and over protectiveness feeling.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/28
Do you realize that your naruto is exactly like sakura, like she loves sasuke because he is cool, and from a powerful clan, not knowing shit about him.
And naruto is all over cringing around 'hime-sama' or some shit, because she is a princess. Fucking hell. And since when does naruto gets to the point over using and exaggerating honorofics and given name. Its really getting to my nerves. One thing naruto ignores is position and looks at what you really are and deserve rather than jumping up and down at the sight of a princess.
Even canon naruto wasn't this cringy.
Random Reader Guy chapter 1 . 9/29
Simpruto
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8
yo, I came from 'whats the worst Naruto fic you have ever read' on reddit, and your fic got recommended there as the worst of them all, and I completely fuckin agree. Some kind and helpful person wrote a rant about it. and judging from the rant and what I read so far, they're completely right. WHAT IS THIS DISGUSTING PIECE OF ABOMINATION?! WHY DO I FIND YOU FUCKIN HINATARDS EVERYWHERE?! This is THE MOTHER OF HINATA SUCK UPS! YOU FRICKIN MADE NARUTO A PATHEIC WEAK LITTLE PUPPY WHO PANTS AFTER HINATA, the 'goddess'. THIS FIC SHOULD BE BURNED IN THE DEPTHS OF TARTARUS ALONG WITH YOU WHO ARE GUILTY OF WRITING THIS SHIT, AND OTHER HINATA SUCK UP FICS TAHT YOU WROTE! Most beautiful?Pfft….I'll take Konan with a heartbeat. Cool? Standoffish? Strong? AS IF All in all, this is a piece of revolting bullshit that makes me want to puke in your face and shld be erased from existence. SO...I hereby declare this the WORST Naruto fanfic in the entire GALAXY. Lastly, I thank the person who has ranted about this fic on reddit. Now I know to avoid this piece of dog shit like the plaugue.
Blandusername chapter 12 . 7/19
This is the most weeaboo story I have ever read hahahahaha! You say matte the what like back to back!? Don’t they mean the same thing? Also what’s the point of the Japanese words anyway they don’t elevate the story?! Also the pace is really slow.
Guest chapter 59 . 1/29
nice epilogue for Princess of Konoha
Eternal712 chapter 36 . 12/21/2019
I just have to say, I have rarely been more excited to read about any Naruto moment more than this fight between Hinata and Naruto. This story has been great, it's well written, and the buildup to this point has been amazing. I cant wait to see where this story will take me. Thank you!
BorutoIsTrash91 chapter 2 . 6/1/2019
this is so fluffy omgggg i cant take itt
Maximum Over-Saiyan chapter 22 . 1/3/2019
Now that you mention it, Training Ground #44 being called "The Forest of Death" suddenly makes a lot of sense. I'm surprised I didn't make the connection sooner.
creativesm75 chapter 59 . 9/21/2018
nice
death390 chapter 59 . 8/9/2018
I enjoyed the story though the princess is quite plank in this early part I’m hoping to see corrected in the second. I like the inversion on naruto and Hinata’s dynamic.
Sarcasm Dragon chapter 1 . 6/2/2018
I'm going to add my opinion on the use of Japanese in your story:

First, using words in Japanese which have equivalents in English is off-putting for all but weeabo. I get the desire to add every little bit of culture you can to the story, but sometimes less is more. This already being totally written, I don't expect you to go back and edit it, but that's the impression the story gave me. However, having each chapter having a Japanese term (with translation) would have been nice.

Second, if you're going to try and peddle culture in the story, don't be wrong. Your use of "teme" started out fine, but messed things up when you tried to make it plural. "temeera" may be an insulting way to refer to a group, but it doesn't mean "jerks" in the same way the English word does. "Naruto knew how to deal with temeera" isn't "Naruto knew how to deal with jerks."

Despite this minor issue, I'm going to keep going.
Blackchocolate1945 chapter 45 . 1/12/2018
I must say I really like your story, really. But there are just something that don't add up...
1. (to the the readers)
The way I see it, naruto's obsession on Hinata is similar to the one Hinata have of Naruto in Canon (for hinata, Naruto can do no bad and she seeks to become strong mainly for him, to stand by his side as equal... So for all you out there that say Naruto's obsession on Hinata is unhealthy, you're just being blind, obnoxious and hypocritical.)
2.(to the authors)
Naruto's fight against Hinata... Really ? He shouldn't have won, No way !
You really got us confused here ! First you make Hinata seems like this invincible warrior princess, then you make her loose like THAT. No ! That's not right... I'm sorry but not sorry, you sucked big time there.
Guest chapter 31 . 12/15/2017
This story isn't bad... It's just that I constantly find myself feeling like something is off...
I think that what bothers me most is Naruto's obsessive behavior towards Hinata.
It's one thing for him to scream about being hokage and realizing his somewhat logical dream but he develops this weird obsession about this girl he only saw once? That's just weird... And somewhat creepy. It also doesn't add up with the slightly more intelligent way in which he is described in this fic.
I just think that it would have been far more logical to have actually made Naruto and Hinata friends- real friends not just a one sided delusional "I shout it so you are" friend but an actual friendship with a background. Than it would have made sense for Naruto to want to become hokage or something so that he can openly interact with his best friend while getting the attention he seeks.
Another thing that is bothering me is the extremely slow pacing of this story... A lot of content just makes me somewhat bored and gets me to just skip whole paragraphs and sometimes even whole chapters.
In slight contrast to all I wrote above, this story is actually very well written and has an original idea and a very solid background to the world its set in.
If you like slower paced, well written stories that go into the more political and technical espects of the narutoverse you might like this.
All I wrote will hopefully be taken as constructive criticism... I don't mean to insult. I just want to show my appreciation for the writers by expressing my honest opinion. I really do find the writing to be good and the concept interesting it is just that I feel that there are somethings to be said about the execution that might be holding this story back.
Elogost27549 chapter 59 . 12/6/2017
This is more of a comment about the whole story rather than just this one chapter. The Hyuga are more important, Hinata is more serious/formal, Naruto knows a very small amount of sealing, and Hinata is basically the MC. These are literally all the meaningful differences between this 536K word story and canon. I don't want to say don't read this, because that sounds harsh, but honestly you shouldn't read this unless you feel like rereading canon from a slightly different Hinata's point of view.
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