|Reviews for Princess of Konoha|
| Oh No It's Mr Gibbles chapter 1 . 5/5/2015
| Draco Oblivion chapter 50 . 5/1/2015
Huh, there are actually a surprising amount of mistakes this chapter, guessing it was a rush to finish?
Last two chapters I have been disappointed to see that they were filler only to get dragged into the brilliance of your storytelling. Just goes to show that no regardless of how annoying I find what you write about, I'm going to enjoy reading it :p
A standout moment was Shikamaru's hamfisted attempt to get Naruto to admit to his crime and say what he had planned next. Also have to appreciate the adorable Akimichi. As always though I loved the way you show everything that goes on and just expand and unpack scenes in interesting ways without filling them with description porn
| NCA chapter 50 . 5/1/2015
Wow, two chapters that are completely irrelevant with the current event ongoing and not wanted. Great way to kill the flow of your scenes. Please teach me more meaningless ways to fubar it up?
And no I haven't enjoyed any of these interludes since I want to read the actual plot and not these intrusive bit that I have no interest reading in the first place.
| bageltiger chapter 50 . 4/30/2015
These chapters are so funny
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 50 . 4/30/2015
I'm honestly hoping this is the last interlude for a while so we can see the Naruto and Hinata vs Gaara fight.
I loathe the Uchiha broom sweeper guy and I hope he's one of the casualties of the invasion while the Akimichi were safe and get to let Naruto into their restaurant from then on.
| Silmr3 chapter 50 . 4/30/2015
these interludes are so large and so many that you should probably consider posting them separately from the main story, they just get in the way and mess up the stories flow
| tanzar81 chapter 12 . 4/29/2015
So is Naruto really gonna be a one trick pony. Seals are awesome and very versatile. But you have to be able to defend yourself before, during, and after you use them. Tiajutsu, kenjutsu, or just plain old jutsu. Heck if you don't want him to use anything but seals then atleast let him be smart enough to say oh man maybe I should make myself as fast and stealty as I can so I can atleast get away and hide from people until I can use my seals.
I'm going to give you the wave arch for Naruto to grow a brain and learn how to defend himself or atleast get faster. Otherwise I'll be moving on.
Please don't take this wrong because I really like the basic idea but no ninja could ever survive on one art alone.
| tanzar81 chapter 10 . 4/29/2015
Soooo, I like the story just fine. However I want to crawl inside your head and strangle your Shino to death, bring him back just so I can torture his soul with Naruto singing Karaoke to We are the champion's for the rest of eternity. Other than that great job so far.
| Gremlin Jack chapter 49 . 4/29/2015
You just interrupted an invasion with a long digression on Naruto's seal design methods. All I can say is, these damn seals better be relevant to the invasion...
| Jiggly Joe chapter 49 . 4/29/2015
I think I have to agree with "A Person", the Interludes seem incredibly pointless and it's very disapdisappointing to wait for a new chapter only to be met with something irrelevant to the plot at hand. And what's the purpose behind them? Why are they needed?
I don't mind the shifts in POV so much, though I would rather get on with the main points. It seems like what Sasuke and Sakura are doing is important if not just for the fact that they're Team 7 so no issues with that. I would just really like the plot to move along :/it just feels like you're dragging it out unnecessarily
| A Person chapter 49 . 4/29/2015
I have to ask. What exactly is the purpose of these interludes? time spent writing these could be better spent advancing the plot with new chapters, and its incredibly frustrating to wait a week or more for a chapter only to be disappointed and completely ignore it due to a lack of interest.
Also on the subject of lack of interest, perhaps it would be a good idea to restrict the number of POV's in future chapters. nearly half of chapter 47 was spent with a new OC that i quite frankly couldn't care about, with the other half of both 47 and 48 being broken between the forest group and the city groups, severely limiting the advancement of the plot. while this is perfectly fine during peaceful chapters, i don't find it adequate during high intensity situations as i'm more eager to see the important parts (Naruto vs Gaara, hokage fight etc). it seems that the important parts of the invasion such as naruto vs gaara and the hokage box fight have been relegated to minor roles with overall unimportant happenings taking up a large part of the chapter's space.
to summarize, the last couple of chapters have been incredibly frustrating with interludes, unwanted POV's, lack of significant plot advancement, and the major parts being relegated to minor positions. while its good to have variation, certain things like kenji's POV or the Sasuke getting put in his place portion, could have been placed in flashbacks after the invasion ended and when people weren't so eager to see the finale of this arc.
Im sorry if i seem rude or overly ranty to anybody, but its been a fairly long time since i've seen a fanfic with this much promise and talent, and i despise seeing a story like this have enough minor problems (in my opinion) to build into a much bigger problem. I hope that the author and other reviewers can see this as understandable frustration and a desire to see the story be the best it can be rather than blatant flaming and anger, and i hope that the author can continue to write this wonderful story regardless of my criticism being accepted or not.
| bageltiger chapter 49 . 4/29/2015
These are always so funny
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 49 . 4/28/2015
I can't wait to see Operation Fire Fire Festival... this is going to be epic.
| Bookaholic21 chapter 48 . 4/26/2015
Love, love, looooooove this story. It has everything I want in a story. Strong females, cold blooded killing, complex relationships. It's just wonderful. I also love your culture corners. I'm having fun and learning!
I only have 3 comments/questions.
1. Where is the Kyuubi? As much as I love sealmaster! Naurto I'd like to see some good old fashion Kyuubi chakra shroud Naruto.
2, I hope Naruto learns more about his Uzumaki backround and expands beyond sealing.
3. Can we get a list of all the side characters eventually? I get a little confused on who is who.
| Guest chapter 48 . 4/23/2015
Princess of konoha moments with the Prince/saviour of the world ...we want more