Excellent story

hahahaha the last part. perfect. hilarious. Becker killed it!

great story! you had me laughing the whole day. thank you :D

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oh, I really liked Abby's attempts to get Becker and Jess closer.

No worries Captain, the girls can handle themselves :D cool!

typically people with no clue but trying to make money out of everything *shakes head*

go team!

hehe of course Lester, always prim and proper!

oh, nooo Jess... O.O

oh yeah, but the team is at the ready :o)

oh dear, that was close! I'm glad the team was around, even if Jess could manage the most part her own quite well

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hehehe so Becker can easily understand the expression on other women, aha, very interesting Captain, very interesting.

aww that was cute, "Yes, dad..."

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Wow, Abby, I couldn't believe it, but you did a great job! cool reaction from the guys :D

hihihi, of course Matt would tease about Becker's reaction :D

aww the Becker-Matt-banter is so sweet :D

ow. Matt that was fabulously mean, too great hehehehe

oh my god. you had me shout with laughter!

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yay Duncan, you have a job! cool!

and hehe to Becker's reaction. But since when does Jess need help in clothes from Abby? She looks great all the time :D

hahahaha cool product. and great reaction of Matt :D

aww lovely, Becker trying to rescue Jess. And go girl, you can manage your own.

I have the slightly feeling that after that trip the ARC could get a lot of new employees :D

fabulous. Becker getting along with Logan quite well :D

oooh it's getting interesting. and well done to the team, they transformed perfectly! can't wait to read how Becker will come across :D

I was a little surprised that suddenly Emily was there in the armoury with Becker and Jess, but meeh, who cares. Jess did a great job in dressing up Becker, and *shriieek* finally, she got to run her fingers through his hair :D

off to read the rest

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