Reviews for Time Turned Back |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. You handled the HJP power level fairly well. And your depth of pranking ideas was wonderful. Thank you for a fun read. -C |
![]() ![]() mcgonnagall singing the queen of the night aria from mozart's opera the magic flute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Voldemort eventually ran into a Romanian wizard, and strangely enough the man was born at the end of July...he was also born of a squib and a muggle. When Voldemort challenged him, he was killed off by an obscure and mostly forgotten spell that targeted the magical core rather than the body...his horcruxes were destroyed the second he tried to use them. HILARIOUS. HAHAHAHA. 10/10 Thanks for the hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... They need to expand that clever runicwork series to create an entire worktable that self-stabilizes, to counteract the wave motion at sea, or brewing on board is going to be frustrating. Or something to encapsulate the whole lab room that does that along with other useful things like self-sealing into stasis with a flick of a single spot in case of "interruptions", sealing against water in case of storms or other damage, maybe some extra layers of whatever armoring might protect against canonballs and other threats that could damage the ship... Damaging a Potions Lab with experimental brewing in it can be potentially worse than hitting the ammo depot- the gunpowder will only blow up and set things on fire. The Potions and ingredients set askew and contaminated forcefully could do /anything/, including creating a zombie plague, turning the ship into a seamonster, or ripping a hole in reality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice one. I think it's time for another time travel story in which Harry Potter goes back and kicked VoldyDeath eaters arse big time as well as Dumbledore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is fantastic! All the kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved every bit of this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was pretty funny, silly and good natured. It is amazing what growing up in a time of peace can accomplish! |
![]() ![]() I was enjoying this story until this chapter when it descended into parody. I'm hoping it's a temporary malaise. Since when were dark marks on men's shoulders? Was he running around with out a shirt or was the dark mark sewn into his clothes? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the last time I commented on this site was about a year ago now, so that should go to tell you how much I loved this book. This was the best thing I have read in a while and I would definitely recommend reading this. Keep ip the good work, author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A cracking good read, thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So you changed it so Snape and Lily weren’t friends? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the laugh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Genial y muy entretenida historia, gracias por compartirla, abrazos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did enjoy your story. But Daffy and Bugs? Pppffttt. You did that just to get in the rabbit season joke! [reader shakes head] Anywho...this was unique and I am glad I read it. :) |