| Reviews for Time Turned Back |
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   ranchan-akari chapter 21 . 9/18 This was so much fun! Thanks for writing! |
| dovyzz chapter 21 . 9/12 Great story. |
| rosebud90 chapter 21 . 9/4 Love your story |
| Darkeyes7 chapter 21 . 9/1 I liked the overall story, it was interesting and funny. but I have to say the ending wasnt my favorite. I didn't like how you just got rid of Remus werewolf and said his problem was he needed to 'make peace' with his 'wolf side' after dunking him in a magic spring. That seemed really sloppy. And I also wasnt a fan of Gabriel having two wives, but mabye that's cause I'm traditionalist. What exactly was giving him two wives supposed to prove? That he was the manliest of all men or something? Throughout the story it became harder and harder to remember that Harry and Gabriel were the same person which explained some ooc instances. But then again that was 'Gabriel' s charecter in your story. The way Severus turned around was interesting to watch along with how you kept lucious malfoy the reasonable the same. I liked it. But I really wasnt a fan of the Remus prank because if I was James or Sirius when I found out he faked his death, I'd be all over Gabriel for making me feel that way. You seemed to skim over the 5 stages of grief quickly if mentioned at all to get what you wanted out of your charecters. Anyway, that's about it. I think overall this story was really great and enjoyable. I'm glad you spent your time to write it, because I had a lot of fun staying up extra late to finish it. Good job and good luck in the future. |
| crista blood chapter 21 . 8/26 la mejor historia de todas. me enamore |
| jupimako chapter 21 . 8/14 That was hilarious! Thanks for sharing. |
| Serena Salvatore chapter 21 . 8/2 This was an amazing story to read. I loved it, it was original and very well written. |
| SevmyLuv chapter 19 . 7/31 SOooo many plotholes I won't bother pointing them out but overall it was a fun read. |
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/28 I truly enjoyed reading your story. You had me laughing so hard a few chapters ago I had to put it down for a bit. But I loved it. Great story! ! |
| orangesorafan chapter 21 . 7/24 that was awesome |
| Prabhleen Arora chapter 21 . 7/24 Amazing Story... Funny and interesting... Loved it... |
| GIRL wage ngvc bfgffn chapter 1 . 7/11 LOL I loved it. |
| comodo50 chapter 21 . 7/7 Really liked the story and how you added a few tidbits here and there from different series. Would have liked to see more things with femHarry tho :p |
| R0JA2017 chapter 21 . 6/30 this was an awesome story. keep it up. |
| George1892 chapter 21 . 6/28 Goodish but it wanes a bit in the second half. |