Reviews for Time Turned Back
Guest chapter 14 . 10/13/2017
this fic... is so sexist and fatphobic and gross. im so fed up with this. also the idea for reselling copies of the marvel comics? intellectual property theft. cursed.
marzipan0 chapter 21 . 10/5/2017
Who was 'potioning' Sirius and James?
staar chapter 21 . 9/26/2017
Loved this, it's been so long that I haven't enjoyed a story this much ! Thanks :)
ranchan-akari chapter 21 . 9/18/2017
This was so much fun! Thanks for writing!
dovyzz chapter 21 . 9/12/2017
Great story.
rosebud90 chapter 21 . 9/4/2017
Love your story
Darkeyes7 chapter 21 . 9/1/2017
I liked the overall story, it was interesting and funny. but I have to say the ending wasnt my favorite. I didn't like how you just got rid of Remus werewolf and said his problem was he needed to 'make peace' with his 'wolf side' after dunking him in a magic spring. That seemed really sloppy. And I also wasnt a fan of Gabriel having two wives, but mabye that's cause I'm traditionalist. What exactly was giving him two wives supposed to prove? That he was the manliest of all men or something?

Throughout the story it became harder and harder to remember that Harry and Gabriel were the same person which explained some ooc instances. But then again that was 'Gabriel' s charecter in your story. The way Severus turned around was interesting to watch along with how you kept lucious malfoy the reasonable the same. I liked it.

But I really wasnt a fan of the Remus prank because if I was James or Sirius when I found out he faked his death, I'd be all over Gabriel for making me feel that way. You seemed to skim over the 5 stages of grief quickly if mentioned at all to get what you wanted out of your charecters.

Anyway, that's about it. I think overall this story was really great and enjoyable. I'm glad you spent your time to write it, because I had a lot of fun staying up extra late to finish it. Good job and good luck in the future.
Crysta heart chapter 21 . 8/26/2017
la mejor historia de todas. me enamore
jupimako chapter 21 . 8/14/2017
That was hilarious! Thanks for sharing.
Serena Salvatore chapter 21 . 8/2/2017
This was an amazing story to read. I loved it, it was original and very well written.
SevmyLuv chapter 19 . 7/31/2017
SOooo many plotholes I won't bother pointing them out but overall it was a fun read.
Guest chapter 21 . 7/28/2017
I truly enjoyed reading your story. You had me laughing so hard a few chapters ago I had to put it down for a bit. But I loved it. Great story! !
orangesorafan chapter 21 . 7/24/2017
that was awesome
Prabhleen Arora chapter 21 . 7/24/2017
Amazing Story...
Funny and interesting...
Loved it...
willow 063178 chapter 1 . 7/11/2017
LOL I loved it.
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