Reviews for Time Turned Back |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool not much bad lily miss perfect. And James a bad forward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wanted to know if you need a british test reader because im always happy to help Also love this chapter looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() good lie/half truth |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this looks like a good story, please do more chapters soon for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too true ( the last sentence) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the beginning chapter very much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! \o/ So looking forward to more of this awesomeness ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed the concept when you wrote as a one-shot/fic idea, so I can't wait to see where you take the entire story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually like how u described the maruders and Lily. Lily always seemed like the most popular girly girl in the school type. She's not stupid but a bit vain but I like. Can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is epic. More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah you make this into a story. is gabriel going to get will snape? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting! |
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