|Reviews for Fire and Ice|
| stillontheboat chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
This is one of my favorite stories, because of the painstaking dedication to detail and character development. You've got action, romance, angst, and dry wit down to a fine art, and I salute you.
My only problem is...
where is the rest of the story? I chanced upon the revisions, but there's only fourteen chapters posted now and the story is listed as complete. I hope the rest is reposted as soon as possible so everyone can be touched by your story.
I await updates for the sequel with baited breath.
| JT chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
I've read this fic for probably 50 times already and it still doesn't get old. To think about it, I don't even know why I'm reviewing; Altol won't probably read this anyway since she (or he?) had finished this a long time ago, but hey.
Altol- You are a fanfic god.:) This fic's the one that got me hooked on Seiftises. And even though I've probably read all the Seiftis fics here (yes, I plowed through pages and pages of archives), this is still my favorite. You gave the characters so much depth that I couldn't help but wonder if you gave them even more thought than the dudes at Square. You also managed to show new sides to them while staying true to the personalities they had during the game. One thing though, the chapters are quite long. Okay, not quite, long enough that I skimmed a few chapters because it was getting a bit tiresome. Don't worry, you made up for it in those Seiftis fluffy sugary stuff anyway. Those parts made me squeal like a little girl. Lol. And I loved the ending. It was so nice and sweet and funny.:) I do hope you write more Seiftises. I'd write more but I'm getting sleepy so there. Ciao.:)
| Paru-sama chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
I don't think I can find any other words.
| champylin chapter 37 . 5/31/2008
I read the story for like 2 straight sleepless nights... it's so wonderful... marvelous... a total masterpiece... It surely made a an avid QuistySeifer fan.. LOL
Anyway... you're really great...
Great job on the story... _
| Cat chapter 37 . 4/17/2008
hooray for emotional rollercoasters. That was brilliant :D I loved every chapter, even if it was torturous at some points to get through bucketfulls of angst. It was a really beautiful fic, and I really enjoyed reading it! Thanks alot for writing it, and i shall now move on to the sequel
| cat chapter 30 . 4/16/2008
you're brilliant. best battle scenes i've ever read, and the most i've ever cried reading something :)
| Cat chapter 29 . 4/16/2008
| cat chapter 28 . 4/16/2008
no, seriously. this is actually killing me...
| Cat chapter 26 . 4/16/2008
and that chapter made me cry D:
| Cat chapter 25 . 4/16/2008
he better not be dead...
| cat chapter 24 . 4/15/2008
ah, in addition to the previous note, the forboding phrases such as:
…And it was about to get worse…
unaware of how true his words were about to become.
that you sling in evrey couple of chapters may just be the death of me.
I'll have to stop here for tonight, but I can't wait to finish!
| cat chapter 23 . 4/15/2008
my favourite chapter so far.
Could be that it's really late and i'm tired and therefore more prone to be emotional, but it was billiant.
Both touching and exciting :D It almost kills me, the way that Seifer and Quistis won't just see the light and kiss already, but it's utterly riveting.
I love the real sentiment and deep thought you've put into this, as well as a complex plot and well developed characters. I especially love the combination of past and present, and dreams of the future. The way you've written dreams is also refreshinly original, it really does emulate the confusion and emotion of real dreams.
I'll stop ranting now and continue reading. I really love his fic, and you combined with xahra99 have made Seifer/Quistis one of my favourite couplings. Really believable and completely beautiful.
| bhoy1888 chapter 37 . 3/5/2008
in all honesty beutiful story one of the best ffVI fics ever
| cerespallas chapter 37 . 2/28/2008
At first I'm curious. What kind of story that manages to get 1133 reviews in just 37 chapters?
Wow! This story is really good! Angsty and deep, and I'm glad that you made it happy ending!
Not that I mind sad ones, but death and violence bring the tears out of me, and my eyes had bulged more than enough reading all those angst, as anything concerning Quistis and Squall brings enough angst as it is.
| Ardwynna Morrigu chapter 5 . 2/27/2008
Wow, it certainly lives up to expectations!