|Reviews for Fire and Ice|
| invisiblesplotch chapter 35 . 6/22/2005
Wah! *Ahem* LOved it to bits. What can i say again? Loved the Seiftis bit when Seif showed Quis his old house and the paint fight. The ending is absolutely perfect. Just a big happy family. A little fluffy, but absolutely perfect for this story, thank you for this awesome fic, if you're gonna work on a sequel, i'm definitely gonna look out for it. Cheers!
| invisiblesplotch chapter 34 . 6/22/2005
Wow! This was a great chapter. Loved the humour in it, Squall the plant, Cerberus and Angelo, the part about Quisty punching Seif was really priceless, it's so nice to see something that's not trite, but still endearing, loved the way how you portrayed all the characters as well, very likeable, it's great to see Seif and Quis back together, amazing how you put everything together and make it flow so wonderfully-on to the next chap of your fic)
| Kirin0 chapter 35 . 6/21/2005
It was the most wonderful story! Believe it or not, I, too, have been lingering here for these past few years.
Good luck and such! *lamer* :D Great indeed.
| Turtle's Chopsticks chapter 35 . 6/20/2005
Let me start off saying I love your story. It has an excellent plot. I disagree with you when you say its 'fairy-tale and whimsy'. It is very original. I would appreciate it very very very much if you made a sequel to this story.
I hate to say it but your story does have a few lose ends. Rinoa told Quistis to protect 'him' and we never saw where that went. I would really love to find out what Angelo and Cerberus pups look like. Slightly disturbing imagery I know. You never continued with what happened to Rajin. And what happens with Seifers new sword? Did Quistis get over her fear of mirrors? Did Seifer help? Your ending was good but it all happened slightly to fast. Irvine would die of embarrassment if Selfie ever found out about the exclusive Nudist Club. The same goes for Zell. Oh god that would be hilarious. Some time in that house by the sea would be nice for Seifer and Quistis. Where was Seifers 24-hour surveillance? Cid did have him placed under it in chapter three. In the beginning Quistis was all spitfire. Where did that go after her break down in the snow? Ha Ha I rhymed :P. I don't feel Matron Had a decent role in the story. And there were times Cerberus seemed to disappear like during Gardens collapse. It also seemed to me that Seifer and Quistis had a more active relationship in the beginning than in the end; Quistis spitfire personality disappearing? Both of them also seemed to...I don't know..sense each other more in the beginning than in the end.
That was just what I figured could have been explained better. I will love your story with all its faults though. I deplore you to make a sequel to this marvelous piece of fanfiction. This had made me dislike all other FFVI fanfiction; it made me like the characters like they are here. It also made me dislike all other fanfiction authors because they don't show as much detail as you do. So I thank you and I curse you. I’ll be waiting on your future fics. Good job by the way.
P.S. I can't axess my e-mail if you do decide to e-mail me.
| Solaria735 chapter 35 . 6/19/2005
I started reading this story last summer, back when it was probably only halfway written. I must say, the time you put into the ending (and the story in general) really paid off, and the year that I've spent reading it was worth it. Everyone was still able to have a happy ending with a little bit of sap, yet it wasn't overdone or too unbelievable in the context of the story. The happy ending had to build up slowly, rather than go from angst to happy fairy tale land. Thank you for this story. It's my favorite Seiftis ever, and one I would love to reread someday. Truly a wonderful piece of fiction. I would tell you to get this professionally published if you could get around the copyright issues- it's definitely of that caliber. Overall, an AMAZING work that I will love for a long time, especially for your fleshed-out and believable characterizations of Seifer and Quistis.
| frost chapter 35 . 6/19/2005
oh wow, i'm speechless, smile* i started the story when it first appeared, and i've been following it for years. I'm so happy that the way it ended, and i loved the way that it was with the camera, it was so perfect. It also makes me kinda sad cause its over, and its been so great and unending until now, i must say you've written a hell o'va story, its been wonderful to read. Thank you.
| mysteryscienceseed3000 chapter 34 . 6/19/2005
That was a very well written chapter. Your emphasis on internal dialogue was percise and well focused. the character interactions were very fitting and individual. You're mixture of external and internal dialogue helped a great deal to add depth and impression to the characters, making each line meaningful and not contrived or typical as can easily be the case. You're focus on detail was also handled well. In terms of story plot, I think it's been pretty consistant throughout. the various cliff hangers and twists lend credit to your skill and I applaud them both. Your story helps transform characters in a believable and provocative way. Nicely written. You have much talent. Thank you for posting.
| Shortey chapter 35 . 6/18/2005
This story is purely stunning and beautiful. This is the best Seiftis fic and my most favourite story. I was almost screaming inside when reading the reunion between Seifer and Quistis. I like it how you make it all original and not all cliche such as Quistis falling into Seifer's arms and both of them confessing their undying love. It's absolutely great. It's also moving reading about Seifer truly putting his past once and for all by burning in the old shack he lived as a child. By destroying, he's destroying along the bad memories and pain built up inside him.
Your very ending was good, but I was kinda expecting a little more on Seifer and Quistis. I was hoping to read the life they've always dreamt of by the house on the beach. Maybe someday you'll consider writing another Seiftis fic. That would be brilliant coz I really love your story. I'm sure the rest of your readers would want to read more of your work. I'm gonna be sad not reading any more good Seiftis story. This is truly the best, I never tire of reading the chapters over and over again. Good luck to you and whatever you do!
| EneriRenie chapter 35 . 6/18/2005
Hello, this is my first time to review your fic but I've been following it for quite a while now. ; 'Fire and Ice' is truly one of the best and most beautifully written fanfiction I have ever read. It's really great that you've finally finished this, but at the same time...hehe, oh well. It's over. I'll be sure to read your other works in the future.
| Wolf of Light chapter 35 . 6/18/2005
*Pops bottle of champaigne* Congrats Altol for completed one/if not best F fanfiction. You've easily (well, maybe not easily) managed to capture so much emotion and build on each character. I know I'm a bout to sound like an idiot but this is the first fanfiction I've ever really been caught up in emotionally. In short, congrats yet again.
As for a sequel I'd be selfish saying I wanted it to end with them happily ever after but since I'm not I'd have to say yes to one.
| taibhse chapter 35 . 6/18/2005
absolutly brilliant. the whole thing. loved it, best story on i'm serious.
if you ever write a sequel i will definatly read it. and i'll probably reread several times more. you've made these simple videogame characters into real, living, breathing entities in the way only good literature can.
my congratulations to you for completing such a project.
| Gerbil X chapter 35 . 6/17/2005
Rather than give you a long winded and boring wall of text, all I will say is this; awesome...
| Lain of the Weird chapter 35 . 6/17/2005
Aw... Twoo luff. *roots for a Sequel* Three ytears eh? wish I had that kind of endurance. Kick ass!
| The Tiramisu Of Impending Doom chapter 35 . 6/17/2005
Congratulations on finishing this lovely tale! It's the best Seifer/Quistis story on this site. Your dialogue and characterizations, and everything in between just really blew me away, and I'll definitely come back to your page to read this story again, if not just for Seifer being a smart-ass. And Quistis breaking the poor bastard's nose. And I'll read your sequel, which will probably kick as much ass as this story if you choose to make one. Thanks for sharing, and I hope to read more from you soon!
| Vampiress-Alexiel chapter 35 . 6/17/2005
*cries* aw I love this story... I think it has got to be my favorite one on Fanfiction. Wow, I loved it so much... *sniff* aw man...
The camera scenes at the end was a really good way to end it _ Much like the ending of Final Fantasy 8, eh? ;) I love it!
Woo... congratulations on an excellent story _ I look forward to keeping an eye out for more!