Reviews for A Spartan in Westeros (A Song of Ice and Fire X Halo Crossover) |
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![]() ![]() When is the next update it’s been years now I need a update this story is so great author please you can’t stop |
![]() ![]() ![]() Both the Master Chief and Jamie Lannister came across as OOC in this chapter. The whole fight at the end was pretty cringe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you really just have Jon Snow and the Master Chief have the same fingerprints? This has been a decent fic so far but you go way too heavy on the glazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another made up Spartan augmentation in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All right this is a pretty pointless chapter. You're just repeating exposition at this point, we've already read all of this in a previous chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's rather funny hearing the Master Chief call the Westerosi ignorant for believing in superstitions, reveling in his own ignorance to the fact that magic is actually real. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1) Unless there's been a retcon I don't know about a Spartans liver isn't enhanced at all by their augmentations. Are you just making up non canon enhancements for the Spartans in this fic? 2) No, drinking straight distilled water is not good for you. The loss of salts and essential minerals makes distilled water f up your body's electrolyte balance and cause you problems (muscle cramps, weakness, and heart issues). |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's kind of odd that you're making chief so outright against killing other humans, as if it violates some moral principle of his. It doesn't. The Chief kills humans all the time like it's nothing. He would have literally no compunctions about killing them. it would be more in character for him to kill Rattle Shirt for being hostile and then start talking to the next Wildling in charge. He definitely wouldn't be "uncomfortable and reluctant" about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's kind of odd that you're making chief so outright against killing other humans, as if it violates some moral principle of his. It doesn't. The Chief kills humans all the time like it's nothing. He would have literally no compunctions about killing them. it would be more in character for him to kill Rattle Shirt for being hostile and then start talking to the next Wildling in charge. He definitely wouldn't be "uncomfortable and reluctant" about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's kind of odd that you're making chief so outright against killing other humans, as if it violates some moral principle of his. It doesn't. The Chief kills humans all the time like it's nothing. He would have literally no compunctions about killing them. it would be more in character for him to kill Rattle Shirt for being hostile and then start talking to the next Wildling in charge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely marvelous writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rest in peace a good story |
![]() ![]() No quiero qiuejarme y quiro que sepas que en realidad la historia me gustaba mucho pero queria dcirte que tal vez seria genial un dia reemplazarla por 1 Crossover con una serie de genero de viajes espaciales que mejor encaje y mejor complemente con genero yal universo de Halo |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is truly AMAZING, you should continue it, man |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope you come back to write after leaving it on such a high note |