Reviews for Indomitus
Mukuro234 chapter 1 . 7/9
Wow this was um... Wow
marketeerbubbles chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
WOW. Just... WOW
Jade Potter chapter 1 . 3/4/2018
Your story was Great! I loved the way you described Jack when he was mad... If there is one thing I can appreciate in writing is the descriptions used.
cheyannetang2005 chapter 1 . 1/18/2018
I love fanfics like these where jack is portrayed as the powerful character he is suppose to be. I rlly want to read the story in progress that u mentioned! Pls upload that story !
CrazyGirl1023 chapter 1 . 3/4/2017
wow
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2017
Wowww
Pale Spiritt chapter 1 . 2/2/2017
Beautiful
Blind Skylks chapter 1 . 1/21/2017
Woah... Powerful Jack... Love it!
Eagle Dreamer chapter 1 . 11/29/2016
I would love to read the story you mentioned. please inform me when it's done. thank you and have a nice day.
Littwink chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Wow. Not many people go to this direction.
Samantha2611 chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
That was absolutely amazing. Truely amazing.
I really enjoyed it and it was very well written, please keep writing. :)
jackandelsaforever101 chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
That...was...AWESOME! I love Jack being a force of nature, I always thought of him like that ;) Now I want to do a fan fiction on him being so awesomely powerful ;)

~jackandelsaforever101
Snarky-Teen chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
Let me know when the story you mentioned is done please.
guardianofdragonlore chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
Hm... pretty good. Jack is kickass.
GigglingFangirl chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
I very much enjoyed this.

Expect to see more of my reviews.
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