*falls over laughing* The Marines REALLY didn't want to go that extra diggit, didn't they?

when I first started reading this I didn't think it would be that great of a story but after reading the first chapter I couldn't stop I read this story all day and I LOVED it hope you come back to finish it it was one of my favorite stories.

Dude. kaya really? The friendliest woman on the planet. The woman who wanted to forgive a guy who killed her parents and poisoned her for 3 years. And somehow she has become a yanderay. Tone it down please, there is a point where the scary girl stops being funny and gets disturbing

This is one of the best fics I've ever read, forget specific fandoms, I laughed and cried and got shouted at by my mum for giggling too loudly at about 3 am because I couldn't put this down and go to sleep, so thanks ;) This ranks right up there with 'Reverti Ad Praeteritum' a FMA fic I fell in love with and if you like that fandom you should totally read it. If you do I think you will find I apparently have a 'type' of fanfic that I clearly favour... Anyway, I hope you can sort out whatever is happening in your life and that this story will be updated when you feel up to it again. Thank you!
-SL xxxxx

Anybody else note that all the armada ship names start with a ‘B’ cuz I think that its pretty cool how that worked out.

The sexual stuff and luffys attitude are really off-putting, but im sticking around because this has lots of favorite so there must be a reason...

YOU KILLED HIM! WHY!

Wait...

I really hope you don't add Krieg to his friend list, I hate the way he treats his men, I mean he shot one of them and then he ordered one to his death by poison!

I think the reason most ppl stick to the plot when writing time travel is because they're afraid, say luffy and crew arrived at whiskey peak a week later than they were supposed to, would vivi be gone, dead or worse thats just an example but you get my point. I'm happy your trying something different its so rare in these fics

There's something wrong about Coby cursing. And not in the funny sort of way, it's straight up ruins his character.

Nevermind, read the note about adoption.

You've been plagiarized. Redemption By: NerdsRule94 s/12639168/1/Redemption
The fic seemed familiar and then chapter 8 cinched it for me. Sanji's intro is pretty much copy/paste

"Into the Valley of Death rode the 600" Luffy muttered

..English Literature huh?

Completely awesome and badass. Keep it up dude. This is gold

OMG, I busted a gut laughing at the Religion stuff. Anyway love the Armada fiction. I see you havent update in 5 months. Hope it isnt discontinued, this story rocks. Like to see Ace meeting the Armada and reuniting with Sabo.