|Reviews for The Return|
| Bob The Mercenary chapter 6 . 1/8/2004
Interesting fic to say the least. Frist off i would like to say that i have never read a fanfic that takes place in canada, sorry just had to mention it but it was so out of place to me at frist. So far very cool fic i love ranma's running gag about how a proper sercret organization should be run. so is ranma going to start having an identity problem i mean almost no one treats ranma like ranma in this fic he is either DarkStar, Sunshine, a tool, or a threat no one but Mudock treats ranma like himself and i can see how that could cause him some emotional problems. Overall interesting fanfic and i hope that you update soon.
| Aku-dono chapter 6 . 1/7/2004
8 minutes left, gotta be quick at this, so here goes:
(Took me about 10 seconds, go me _-)
| Alex Ultra chapter 5 . 11/23/2003
I really like this story, and it seems rather well planned out. I shall be watching for the next chapter.
PS. I'm not sure what Alex thinks of all the demon stuff though... O.o
Alex and Alex Ultra
| Adyen chapter 5 . 11/23/2003
Oh My God! You posted it on ! The only online fanfic posting service I review on! Muhahahahahhahah!
Anyways, I LOVE your series, and I'm pretty sure I already sent you an email before, but once again, I can't wait to see what else all the players have in their hands, and how Ranma's wildcard will be played.
| Dark Skuld chapter 5 . 11/21/2003
Awsome, Simply Awsome. This is one of the best and most interesting Ranma/SM Crossovers I've read in a long time. Please make this a long one, and even off shoot stories from this one, like about the origonal DarkStar back in the Silver Millenium
| Khimenko Victor chapter 5 . 11/21/2003
Very good so far but then problems with such twisted fics are usually way closer to the end when "grad scheme" is revealed and looks like something totally stupid. Hope I'll not be disappointed this time.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 5 . 11/21/2003
I'm surprised that Ranma got upset after the battle.
At least in that battle everything was clear black and white.
It's the grey areas that usually get to people.
Murdoch reads Stephen King! *grin* I love the dark tower
Brilliant way to keep Rini around. I never would have
thought of it.
Ranma seemed to be acting a little harsher then I expected
towards Kuno. He is responsible for what Kuno had become
and knows what it's like to be called a freak so he's
got to be majorly stressed out to be behaving that way.
He is really getting paranoid.
The SM group seemed to have no problem working with
the company. Probably part of the reason they were lured
to Canada. Get them used to working and relying on the company
What, were you afraid of being sexually assaulted by a demonic redhead?
That would make one hell of a Omake.
I have expected Nodoka to whip out a contract and a Katana. *grin*
Great scene with his mom.
What did they find in the Gobi? An old SM city or artifact?
I hope the water works on Kuno. Ranma of course will stay cursed.
| Himitsu the Hunter chapter 5 . 11/21/2003
When i began this fic i was a bit sceptical... But as every thing has progressed... well lets just say that if more of this is not written... BaD tHiNgS _
Feed the Need! lol
-Himitsu The Hunter
| dogbertcarroll chapter 4 . 11/4/2003
Hikaru Gosunkugi has a decent role?
Usually he's just an annoying throwaway
character. It's a nice change.
Doctor Tofu Ono. *grin* I thought he
was going to be left out. You seem
to be importing a lot of Ranma characters
from Japan. Of course it wouldn't
be the same without them.
"Oh, you guys suck as a scary secret
organization." LOL! I love this fic.
I like what you did to Kuno. But then
"Tricking a guy into a fuku would do
that," Minako sated.
I assume Nodoka is the women at the
| dogbertcarroll chapter 3 . 11/4/2003
I'm surprised she was smart enough to set up
sleeper cells. Beryl wasn't the brightest
“Unlike other parties, we do not require you
to wear a fuku,” LOL!
LOL. I can just see a young Akane hiding while
Kuno pelts her with fish. You do some nice
work on backstories for character motivation
What next? The Free Masons? Elvis? Maybe the
Canadian Dental Association?
“Make the bad thoughts go away,” Usagi whimpered
silently. I can see we are going to have lots
of fun with that in future chapters!
Nice end point.
| Aline1 chapter 4 . 10/25/2003
Intresting how connections to the company seems to pop up, it will be interesting to see what comes of this and to find out more about what is going on.
| DarkBlueHated chapter 3 . 9/14/2003
OOps forgot to review.
Umm, well it's been great so far. Nothing to complain about. The only REAL thing would be the spacing between the paragraphs. They're too wide. But other then that, this has been an awesome fanfic.
| kbat chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
good story post the next chapter soon
| Hild chapter 4 . 9/10/2003
...the door scene reminds me of Equilibrium.
| The DCG chapter 4 . 9/10/2003
Man thats to good.
I love this story keep writing, Please!