Oh my GODNESS i am so thrilled to have found this! Everything about this makes me happy- its so creative and different but fits FANTASTICALLY and has an amazingly fantastical storytelling vibe to it. Lovely job, this ends up being so SO hopeful for the future and I and a little nervous but very excited for the journey ahead!

Once again my favorite part is that Merlin's not quite so ALONE here- you've fleshed out the magical community wonderfully and he has all kinds of support, and is supporting others in turn.

Thank you so much for writting, take care!

"Fight cautiously, fight smart, but fight the prejudice, or it would never ever go away."

IM SO PROUD OF MERLIN RIGH NOW I CANT EVEN DEAL WITH IT!

Wow, Arthur showing gratitude WITHOUT dying? You know its not the BBC

Not gonna lie that simple "thank you" made me tear up. The small beginings of something great.

I'm been absolutely charmed by this story so far. You've given life to Merlin's world in such a way that I can't help but want to play around in it. It feels warm.
Merlin is dealing with some very complicated and heavy stuff, I love how you describe his thought process and his choices, while also keeping a great balance of light a.d dark moments, along with some FANTASTIC humor.
Wonderful job so far and I love the alternate titles each chapter!

I normally only review at the end of a story but I couldn’t wait.
I absolutely love this story. You have fixed what has caused me so much stress and I can’t thank you enough. I can’t wait to see where it goes!

The description seems to keep switching from a regular bow and arrow to a crossbow though you still say arrow even though I'm pretty sure crossbows arrows are called bolts.

thought you were going to go with Ambrosius but I like the incorporation of Caledonensis! I haven't seen that before! the way you've added in the myths is amazing (I hope Vortigern shows up at one point)
yeah, even though, in the show, they say that mortals can't see Avalon, Elyans funeral is at the lake? talk about a continuity error

Those little alternative titles are making my day.

Should probably be "LOSE" instead of "FIRE". They are shooting arrows and shouldn't even kkow about firing guns. Small nitpick...

From the little I know (thank you national geographic) the typically kill all the Cubs and drive out or kill the males? the mate with the females

Your alternative titles are like Percy Jackson titles. I love them

Lancelot is staying... Cool!:)

Lancelot is nice... Hopefully you won't kill him like in cannon

Loving it...

Loved it

Intense... I loved it.