|Reviews for Thunder|
| RainyThursday chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
It's good for a "fluff for the purpose of being fluff" story but I doubt Los Angeles hasn't seen a blackout in 11 years (at this rate, they have more natural disasters than thunderstorms) also, Ema says "'I...well, I had a bad experience during a thunderstorm when I was sixteen.'"
the SL-9 incident (the Joe Darke killings) happened in 2015, when Ema was fourteen (they also note specifically that Ema was fourteen at the time in some dialogue) the resolution to the SL-9 incident happened 2 years later when she was 16 during 2017 (Rise From the Ashes) and I doubt it would be remembered by her negatively and there were no blackouts during the case
| Sentinel07 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Aw, now that's touching.
Great characterization on both Ema and Klavier. Nicely done.
| codelyokofan210399 chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
So pretty, your writing is very good :) I also love Klema, it's one of my favourite pairings :D (P.S.: Sorry for my bad English -_-u) Keep it up! :)