|Reviews for Burn|
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/7
Oh I hope u continue this story!
| rckyfrk chapter 11 . 6/2
Good god this is amazing. Every single letter is just wonderful. I don't even know where to begin, so I'll just leave it at that.
| heatherrk chapter 11 . 5/16
So happy to see an update on this! I'm glad they found their family...but something is obviously up with Maggie. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Rising-from-the-Wreckage chapter 11 . 5/3
I have been lurking on your page and in your stories for a little while now, but I'm finally bucking up the courage to do what Daryl still cannot. Just like him, I don't think there are proper words to fully express the joy and the sadness and the fear and the love that I have, for not only your storytelling and your brilliant mind, but for this tale in particular. I have been devouring your words with a vengeance these past days, and watching you delve into Daryl's mind is an absolute joy. It seems so rooted in the reality of him, and seeing his internal struggles laid out to light just makes him all the more real to those of us reading.
I understand the struggle to keep going when inspiration is lost, and I'm still struggling to find my own. It's hard, and it's daunting, and the words just tumble around in your head like bees but they just seem to vanish as soon as you go to write them all down. It may take a while, but I hope you don't give up just yet. I know that I am not the only one who will be eagerly awaiting the next update to this, but I know we will all be as patient as possible because this is worth it. YOU are worth it. And what you're doing right here is absolutely beautiful. It's heartrendingly, tortuously beautiful. It makes my heart ache and sometimes I want to cry, but at the same time I have fallen almost as deeply in love with your words as Daryl has fallen for Beth.
And that's saying a lot, I think. ;)
Until next time,
| vettech60 chapter 11 . 4/23
An update! And an awesome one at that! I have missed this story. Love that they have found the family, but will it change things between them? Please don't take so long for the next update (but I'll still be here even if you do! LOL)
| DarylDixon'sLover chapter 11 . 4/23
| Kaz010 chapter 10 . 1/26
Oh wow, I love this story and your writing style :) I see it hasn't been updated in a while so I'm guessing you've given up? Which would be a real shame as it's so freakin' good! I still definitely feel the sting of the whole Beth situation on TWD and love finding stories that bring my Bethyl wishes to fruition lol. Absolutely amazing job and I'm away to read more of your work!
| Ambrosia29 chapter 6 . 11/30/2015
WOW, the feels in this chapter! Make me all warm and fuzzy. Thanks for writing this, they're so sweet.
| Ambrosia29 chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
I think that was the sweetest kiss I've read!
| percabethyl chapter 10 . 10/8/2015
Okay, wow this chapter was amazing! Fucking amazing. Now I got what you said about messing up with the reality, but I think that's why I liked it so much. Everything about the mysterious five walkers, and how all the roads were blocked, etc. And this movie you mentioned, damn, I need to watch it. And Bessie ): For a moment I hoped she would go with them, but I understand that her
psicológico was too fucked up. I feel so sorry for her. About the cars blockig the roads, I thought it was something Rick and the group made to avoid people getting into Terminus. They made that place their new home, right? So I guess this is just something they would pretty much do. Then I tought Daryl and Beth would leave the car and cross the block by walking, but they didn't, so I guess the mass of cars were bigger than I imagined? Well, now I'm curious about what's coming next. I definitely wanna see them reunited with the group, although I love the little home they made back at the number 7 house with the bluw flowerpot 3 But they're not going back there, so, oh hell, what they're going to do? This is going to be a torture for me, wait for the next chapter.
I want you to know that I'm in love with this story and I'm fucking loving your writing skills. I hope to see more of this soon. (:
| heatherrk chapter 10 . 7/9/2015
Some seriously weird shit going on right now! What the hell is up with the five walkers in the road? Don't think they were actually dead...
Are they really going back to the prison? I just want them to go back to their little house and forget about the others. It's too dangerous.
| brady66 chapter 10 . 7/6/2015
They should have just stayed at the cabin and forgot about all of those people that didn't care enough about them to look for them.
| ginafyi chapter 10 . 7/6/2015
Ah, this was a good one! I just love these three together! Nervous about what's going to happen when they find their family!
| rckyfrk chapter 10 . 7/6/2015
Okay, what the hell with the five walkers? Were they really walkers? And they just stood there waiting for them to drive back? That's some seriously scary shit right there.
I guess is don't understand why they can't go back the their house? I get that it means they'll never leave again (unless they have to I'm assuming) but why is that a bad thing?
| SeattleGirl359 chapter 10 . 7/5/2015
Very interesting! I'm excited for more and to see where this all goes to!