Reviews for Something about Jasper
Guest chapter 2 . 6/6
So good!
ninny 1 chapter 2 . 1/8
I liked it
But I feel sorry for Alice and bella
AthenaGrl chapter 1 . 1/3
I've noticed many run on sentences, often marked with too many dashes.

Here is one as an example; it needs to be edited and revised. Do you have a pre-reader or Beta?

Alice-with her almost-copper hair and searing green eyes-looked just like Edward that made Bella think there was something Alice knew about Jasper that Bella didn't.
Mych0ice chapter 2 . 12/13/2016
As always I really enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/18/2016
I didn't think I'll like it I read out of curiosity and I really don't regret it! It's beautiful!
mw138 chapter 2 . 10/5/2016
Wow! I loved everything about this story! I can't wait to read more! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
Still one of my favorite stories. XOXO
Twisted,
Deb
Sherry77 chapter 2 . 7/30/2016
Omg I cried reading this story, it is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read, please please please write more, please continue their beautiful love story

Thank you
Gubefan1980 chapter 2 . 6/13/2016
Wow that was intense poor Jasper what a horrible life he had especially when he was just a ki . Beautifully yet heartbreakingly written
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
Wow that was intense but then Edward and Jasper belong together anyway, alway . You did a great job painting a picture of their "draw" to one another the spark that drew them like magnets to each other. I gyess you would have to say, yes she was only borrowing Edward, he really did belong to Jasper
Anasamantha09 chapter 3 . 6/7/2016
Thank you!
Germanreader83 chapter 2 . 6/1/2016
beautiful !
1tinac chapter 2 . 10/26/2014
Sweet Jasper.
1tinac chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Sweet touching story.
sasharose11 chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Poor Jasper, my heart broke for him. Lovely conclusion for them, or is it just the beginning :-)
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