This is incrediable and that kiss phew smexy ! Can't wait to see what his mother thinks of the girl her son wants to mate haha ;) your an amzing writer can't wait for the next chapter!

This is incrediable and ohh that kissy kissy! Haha his mothers come to berk has she, wonder how she will react when she realises the little blonde hofferson girl has been doing mate things with her son ;) this story is amazing! Please tell me this will eventually get smuty and lemony! Us naughty little fangirls.

This is definitely amazing and wonderful and I simply can't wait to see what happens next! (even though i will as patiently as possible) Love seeing Hiccup and Astrid getting even closer, and the was they interacted in this chapter was a wonderful nod to Hiccup the 'dragon' and her understanding of how to tell him what she's thinking through touch because of how much better she knows him now! Though of course you know all of this but I adore how you wrote it! Now I'm rambling cause I totally haven't slept. xD Keep up the awesome work!

Uh-oh. Momma is gonna come mess stuff up.

Agh update pleaseeeee

Cloudjumper? Hmm...

I wonder how Stoick will react to seeing both Hiccup and Valka again (Probably a little angry, given the fact he still hasn't changed his view on dragons).

Anyways, I'm enjoying this fic immensely and can't wait until the next update!

Wow, what an amazing story, really, i've read it non stop. Really good. I love that it is in Astrid's pov, my fave character actually, and wild Hiccup is totally awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love your fiction so much I hope there will be aan other chapter soon! Thanks for publish this :))

Please write more soon!

EEEEP! I loved the kiss! You did an absolutely amazing job on it. Also for some reason I really liked the part were hiccup got protective over her for it just made me happy, because it shows that he really does care about her. Also I think it'd be awesome if you wrote the kiss from hiccups pov because it's something very new for him and I think it'd be interesting to see what he's thinking during the kiss. Anyways your an amazing writer and please continue writing!:)

Great chapter. I really look forward to the next one. So keep up the good work.

Oh my God they kissed! Do you know what would be great? Write their kiss with Hiccup's pov! This is all new for him, these species, and their tradition and everything, this 'kiss thing' with their mouth, it's new, and I's really love to read about it. Your write is so good! I'm sorry for my bad english, I'm brazilian, I can read but wirting it's something totally different...

Thanks for another great chapter, though I feel bad for Astrid. I respect that she has feelings for Hiccup, that she desires him, may even very much love him. I'm very much for their relationship, and technically she is "in love" with the son of the chief so he really is the true heir, (I know it hasn't been said yet but I kinda figured) But if anything they did got back to the village they would both be in trouble due to her being promised to another. Not for her being with Snotlout but I know how the culture works. It wouldn't be pretty. I'm also assuming that the Stormcutter coming into the village is carrying Hiccups mother. Thanks again can't wait for the next one.

OH MY GODS OH MY GODS THAT CHAPTER HOLY GODS IM SCREAMING

Another chapter so soon! You spoil us, and I love it! Looks like things are about to heat up. wonder if Stoick will be meeting Hiccup soon, I can't wait to see how that plays out.