Reviews for Wild Hearts |
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animemusic54 chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 so the day we've all been waiting for has finally come... great chapter by the way.I was wondering when that conversation would come about. |
My Lord Doctor6735 chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 Soooooo cool. Keep 'em coming. :) See ya later. ALLONS-Y ! |
Angryhenry chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 so she has fallen inlove with hiccup, but... |
deletedforpersonalreasons chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 EEEEEEE! First flight, first flight, oh my pancaakessss. I wonder if it'll turn out okay. WHAT IF SOMEONE SEES HIM. WHAT IF VALKA COMES TO BERK WHILE HE'S OFF FLYING ALL WHERE IS MY BOY AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM, YOU SAVAGE DRAGON HATERS? MY FEELS. MY EVERYTHING And the hiccstrid! (not enough exclamation marks to convery my feelings) Astrid and Hiccup kinda flirting while marking the boundaries on how to NOTFLIRT, PFFF. Gah,, the UST. And Hiccup's exasperation was adorable, and Astrid's unwillingness to tell him not to lick her, eee, i spontaneously combusted. Cannot wait for ch 10! |
My Lord Doctor6735 chapter 8 . 6/28/2014 Well, that was... steamy. :) Can't wait for more. This is awesome. See ya soon. GERONIMOOOOOOOO ! |
Crimson Synapse chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 Bravo! You're pacing Astrid and Hiccup's relationship very well; not too fast, but still brimming with those hidden feelings and sexual tension. There's a lot that still has to happen, but I'm looking forward to their flight together. An observation/suggestion. Snotlout has been the topic of discussion seeing as he and Astrid are to be wed, but he hasn't really made more than one appearance. And while Astrid's mother has taken notice of her absences, no one else has really questioned where she's been running off to in the day, especially with the dragon training she's supposed to be doing. Even with marriage contracts as they are, Snotlout would surely be wondering where she's been... and why she hasn't spent her time with him instead. But with how you're writing this so far I'm certain you have plans for this and much more, and I'm excited to see it play out. Excellent work, and I look forward to your next installment! |
SergeantShinoaHiiragi chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 You just killed me with this chapter. The chemistry beetween Hiccup and Astrid is amazing! Can't wait for chapter ten, update as soon as you can! :) |
Guest chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 I loved this chapter a lot! The whole sparky thing they have... and her explaining to him the mate stuff! hahaha! One note: You called Hiccup "the brunette" in this and brunette is female and brunet is male. You don't have to change it if you don't care. Sorry to bother you uwu. |
Alkeniw Andilite chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 Looks like Hiccup and Toothless are getting ready to meet Berk. Please update as fast as you can! |
PrincessArien chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 Ugh, Astrid, Hiccup...just it over with all ready you two *sighs and rolls eyes* Well, Hiccup doesn't really need that advice I suppose, as he's been nothing but forward and would be more than willing I'm sure XD Stop fighting against Fate, Astrid. Snotface Snotlout is not what the writings of the Norns have decreed for you :P I'm loving every single new update to this story, it's one of my favorites from amongst the stories in this fandom I'm following that are currently in progress. I absolutely can't wait for more, keep up the fantastic work :D |
Akai Tsuki chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 Ahhhhhhh they're finally in the air. :D Super excited for the next chapter since you said *that thing* will be happening in the next one. XD |
maggi.lefay chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 God! This chapter was very good too! I'm dying to know how was the flight of them :D |
Addira chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 My feels for this chapter man. TOOTHLESS IS FLYING HE'S IN THE AIR AHHH |
kitty.0 chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 At least Astrid cleared most of what things are or are not okay to do with someone. |
A Simple Cup chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 Hoping for so much with this story. The sexual tension could be cut with a knife, and I can't wait for you to start cutting! Also waiting intently for Stoicks arrival in this story. Keep it up! I'm loving every word. |