This should have some sort of medical warning on side effects: "contains tons of AWESOMENESS, produces HEAVY ADDICTON, read with discretion". Keep up the good work!

Ohhhhh!
Aplausessssss!
I am loveeeeeee! Updateeeee pleaseeeee!

OHHHHHHH, THIS CHAPTER WAS BEAUTIFUL.
First- that conversation! Astrid, my poor iron girl argh, Fishlegs who sees everything and Hiccup, Hiccup my poor wild baby, confused and dreaming and my baby, my poor lovestruck little baby.
And the point Fishlegs made- how Astrid wasn't like the others, how she could breathe with Hiccup, YES, YES, YES! That is everything I love about hiccstrid wrapped up in a piece of dialogue. EVERYTHING. And poor Astrid's talk with her mum, ughhh, KILL ME NOW BEFORE THIS STORY MAKES ME DIE OF FEELS.
And then Astrid and Gobber talking! ARGH. YES. NO. PLEASE CONTINUE TALKING GOBBER ASTRID FIND OUT FIDN OUT FIND OUUUUUUTTTTTTTTT. HSFESKDDJ
I AM REDUCED TO CAPSLOCK AND ILLEGIBLE KEYBOARD SMASHES.

Ah, I'm so excited to see what happens! This really has me on edge!

-Rebel

Hehe, leading Berk by the side of the future, aye, yes indeed...by the side of Snotlout though? Eh, nah so much. We all know that ship ain't going to sail, no matter how much the Hairy Hooligans expect it will. Nooo, I think I smell an entirely different ship of an entirely different nature just waiting beyond the horizon for its passengers, hehehe.
And oh, you are so close Astrid, so very close. Ye need to not be lookin' at Gobber so much as the company he keeps and who he's the closest to ;P At least she's on the trail now. I'm really loving this whole story and looking forward to seeing more chapters and how it eventually ends, it's really fantastic and you're an amazing writer. All of the character interactions are the best part of this :D

OK that got a little disturbing but I understand since it's m rated. I still like it. As a matter of fact, this is my favorite story. Keep up the good work.

I like it so far. Keep it up.

Finally Astrid is piecing together Hiccup's past. Yay!

Ahh! This is too good! Keep'em coming please. Hiccup and Toothless are just perfect, and I really like the subplot with Astrid and marriage. I wonder who is going to find out about Toothless next. Will Snotlout or the twins discover anything? Or will they be revealed to everyone? But none of that has to happen for a while, though.

I do wonder if Stoick could recognize his son. Valka could, so, probably?

Astrid throws herself wholeheartedly into everything she does, which is probably why she is getting so twisted up.

Wow, so hiccup is the real heir, and is as fast as dragons

Im really enjoying the story so far. I look forward to more.

"Hey, Fishlegs?"

"Yeah?"

She squeezed her eyes shut as tightly as possible. She didn't want to hear.

"It's... bad... to dream about someone else's mate. Right?"
JUST AHHHHHH this entire piece was so well done and the hiccstfid is heavy and your understanding of astrid is a

Astrid has such mixed up feelings. I hope she and Hiccup can have some alone time to help sort out said feelings. And they are so close to finding out about Hiccup's dad. It's all right in front of them. Hopefully Astrid can get a dragon flight in soon.

Oooooooh Gobber's gonna spill! I can't bloody wait.

Sidenote: Awww Hiccup and his awkward talk with Fishlegs was so cute but so sad.