Aaaaw that is so cute. I think Astrid likes him. I can't wait for them to kiss.

good job

"dragged away by a Windwalker" Don't you mean Stormcutter?

THIS IS PROBABLY ONE OF THE BEST FANFICTIONS I'VE EVER READ! You're an amazing writer, keep on writing this! I can't wait for chapter seven!

I'm in love with your story! It's been a really interesting read so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work! You're doing a wonderful job.

I love it when Fishlegs and Hiccup talk dragon. Their friendship is really precious, sometimes.

This is actually a really amazing read. I love your idea, and I think it is really consistent with the characters. I think your writing is really interesting and I can't wait to read more!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH okay so i tried to sound professional in my last review but to hell with that. this story is hitting me right in the feels and feral!hiccup and astrid interactions are precious. (i have a feeling astrid going to try to figure out who his father is and somehow screw it up and give him away sigh)

YOU HAVE KILLED ME. I AM DEAD. DEAD. THAT LAST SENTENCE. YOU ARE MINE, HE SAID. MY FEELS. MY EVERYTHING IT BURRRNSSS
this chapter was so perfect, i've lost my sense of punctuation, i just want to get all my emotions out without bludgeoning them with grammar and editing
fishlegs being the first one to know!fishlegs! him and hiccup talking aerodynamics!
astrid and stormflyyyy awww and astrid hiding out of fear for her and her dragon DDD: !
EVERYTHING HURTS SO AWFULLY WONDERFULLY ARRGH

This story is so addicting! I can't wait to read more.

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! HOW CAN YOU JUST LEAVE IT RIGHT THERE?! WHYYYYYYY?

Really really really love this! Update soon! :)

This is by far the best feral!Hiccup fic I've read. And I appreciate your attention to spelling and grammar - a lot less work on my end when reading. Keep it up!

Cool keep going

This is actually really compelling. I wasn't sure what to expect, but I am enjoying this a lot. You did a really good job with feral!hiccup and I love your style of writing. The interactions between the two are something different than what I've read before. He's very strange and she's very traditional, making the entire thing amusing and just plain interesting. I like how Hiccup just doesn't know the limits too, it's a realistic layer to add to his character in this. I'm also happy you don't just jump into a relationship or intense feelings like a lot of hiccstrid stories. This sounded formal and like I know what I'm talking about but I just really like this okay bye.