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That's doesn't help much. He's being going on with the exact same response about the story's status for the past four years now. Not a full thing beyond "it won't be continued, sorry".

If he can write almost a million words for his other story then write out how it would've finished, then he could do the same for this.

But thank you for that though. I hope he does respond.

To the guest that ask about getting in touch with serpent guy I talked to him briefly over a year ago I said he wasn't going to continue the story. If you or any author would liken to adopt the story try to get a hold him again if he says yes try to keep the spirit of the story we have all come to enjoy over the years

Thanks Vivi , you really fuk that up, lol

Great , Luffy beaten again , sigh

Garbage

So this chapter is pointless then?

Won’t forgive you for the hat tho, never ,ha

Hope this is good ,it’s gonna be a long 1.

omg, Vivi is so useless and pathetic. is she that stupid to not notice that she's just a pile of garbage trying to be important, making Luffy's life harder in the process.

Okay I'm not going to lie I decided to reread your story and post a review and hopes that you will continue the story worst case scenario rewrite cuz I really enjoyed your story despite how many times I was a little upset but that doesn't matter cuz it's your story cuz it is a very good story the only thing that I would really say honestly is if you rewrite make Frankie live and kind of lay off the drama between Nami and Robin in regards to their attraction to Luffy worst case scenario in regards to that is making a harem story but you're the author it's your call I'm just posting this before I reread your story and hopes that you update with the way you have it set up and its Lobby will be badass despite the fact that you killed Frankie but like I said you decide to do a rewrite Frankie lives joins the crew but regardless please I would really enjoy if you continued this I have multiple fanfiction I'm waiting to be updated and honestly this is one of them it's a good concept with him dying and losing the gum gum fruit and getting a new one but please please please if you are still alive continue it or give is to another good author to rewrite it but regardless back to why I reviewed please from a fan don't let this story end this way and die

In hopes of getting a conclusion to this story, I have attempted to contact the author on three separate sites. Here, AO3, and Deviantart.

Despite showing activity on the former two sites, I never received a reply.

If anyone who has worked with the author or even spoken to him before, I beg that you also attempt to reach out to Serpentguy in the hopes of getting a proper update on this story.

He has written out what would happen on his other story, so I am hoping to have the same done for this story that's been abandoned for four years. Despite my and even a friend's efforts, no success in even hearing back.

Serpentguy, if by some miracle you are reading this, please come back to this story one more time. Please do not leave us with this cliffhanger.

holy shit, you know your living a lsd trip when you can saythe tea kettle has gone on a rampage again"

The backstory for Vivi’s fruit doesn’t add up in the slightest. The king bought the it from the black market which means it can’t be the sand sand fruit

is this will keep going mate? :"v it's like years ago since you updated it last?!

God I hate the OC's and that you allowed doflamingo to go to sky island for unnecessary drama I hope you don't change water 7 but u probably did and I hope this isn't gonna turn into a harem well it's been years since you updated still wanted to say it anyway