No anything u were getting so far without lemons...

10th episode and the MC is still being treated like a ragdoll that can be beaten even by the weakest of them in the Grand Line.

Don't get me wrong, the story is well-written but if I wanted to see Mc struggling to the point that it's pathetic... as this IS pathetic, not even interesting anymore... I would have, no actually I would not.

This author overdid it with how weak Luffy is. The MC has literally no chance to win against his enemies and the wins so far were mostly a stroke of good luck. Otherwise, he is being trashed by almost anyone.

This is a fanfiction I certainly do not enjoy.

I always hate it when fanfics humanise devil-fruits and give them personalities in Luffy's mindscape, it's cringy as hell.

I really wanted to like this
I really REALLY did
but after reading the whole story, it feels as if Luffy never gets stronger at all, becoming extremely weak, which kinda ruins it for me.

Damn you made pagaya into an absolute badass

Yo, wondering if you're still around, I was wondering if this fic was up for adoption?
I enjoyed what you had here, and hope to finish it in a satisfying way

This is where I would leave because really Nami wouldn't ever ever leave cremated behind for gold and well its kind of redundant because this looks abandoned but if you read this comment and read ch 995 of manga you would know that Nami fans would be quite offended by the statement that Nami would Leave cremated Her Nakama the one who saved her from pseudo slavery for gold

The Perils of the design team! I love it.

WOW, this chapter is so fucking unreal. The hype, the build up. This chapter is so fucking amazing.

You are one talented writer. I’m super looking forward to the rest of this fic.

Oh shit. This is fucking awesome.

Yesssss LURO

The dumbest fanfic, how could you ruin such a terrible story from history, you want to make a divine hero. Do why do the stupid overcoming at every millimeter. I read until Chapter 19 and waited for something to change. No let's make an ass and then another ass and another ass no less honestly sorry for the author and the character.

Okay... Why does this fic doesnt have angst at genre? Or torture or something Dark? There is almost no romance at all... Is that your (author) sense of humor for putting romance in descriptions so the unsuspected readers fall for your trap? Adventure i get, that is justified but romance is just 1-3% of the story... There is more angst than romance or so i think... Maybe i am the one who is wrong...

Something feels inherently wrong and dirty about destroying the Straw Hat in full. It's a visible representation of The Will of D passed down from Roger and entrusted to Shanks and again down to Luffy.

Ok... After reading the entire thing, honestly imo it's not character developement it's character degradation so far. But oh well, characters are a bit more humane this time so I'll give you props for that. The fic is dark. Too dark tbh. Whatever you justify it with doesn't really matter since I like dark fics myself. But a clear heads up should've been better. No probs though, you gave that. Only problem I've with this one is I hate stupid, idiotic and pathetic protagonists. And your "Luffy" is embodiment of all of that through out the story. And he's insanely weak.