Reviews for The Vanquisher
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21
I would argue that the Dark Load of the prophecy is Dumbledore.
Voldemort only wanted a quick death for Harry, and he was always honest about it.
Dumbledore made sure that Harry had a life so bad he would be willing to die, while pretending to care for Harry.
draco122 chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
that was awesome
Draco122
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
Fun short story and thanks for sharing!
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
I agree with your Harry. Canon Harry did not kill Dolohov in that London restaurant and Dumbles did not kill the same Dolohov in the battle at the DOM. Later on at the Battle of Hogwarts, Dolohov killed Remus Lupin. Canon Harry was an idiot. And Dumbledore, more so.
Harry1675 chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
It's okay but in the beginning, for future reference, remember to put spacing between your periods and commas
Sparkypotter101 chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
This... was a mess. No grammar, missing words, no plot (although the idea is kinda interesting, I guess)... It isn't written well at all. I'm not trying to be mean, but this looks like it was written by a ten year old then rammed backwords through a word processor. Please, go learn how to type and write a half-decent story before you write another story 'just like that'.