|Reviews for Battle for Los Santos|
| Lady Amiee chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
I love this! Brilliant! I have never read a GTA fan fic before, but this ... I would love more. It's really good" I was a bit lost with the flying talk, but to be honest, it didn't detract in any way at all. I loved the details used, and the nice fast pace, as well as the banter between them.
You paint a really good picture in very few words, something I enjoyed a lot. Nice work, sweety. it's so good to see you back in tag. The only real crit I could give was that the ellipses ... need spaces on either side. Lovely stuff