|Reviews for Don't Leave Yourself In The Dark|
| Crimson Fox19 chapter 4 . 1/12
The story was amazing I really loved it and you made this pairing my #1 favorite.
| curlybrow chapter 4 . 9/2/2014
hey, hey, i loved this! written brilliantly! and by brilliantly I mean the sentence construction is smooth, no errs, the use of words (such as altruistic, sodomy) is great, grammar is great as well, and most of all (the thing I'm really looking for) the characterization is similar to the original. Kudos to you my man! (or woman... ehehehehe...)
if you're not so busy, i really want a ZoSanLaw fic, because I've been yearning for some love triangle between my OTP ZoSan to build some tension and angst... something like Sanji confesses his confused love for Zoro, but Zoro refuses him, then Sanji turns to Law for comfort, and when Zoro secretly learns that Sanji and Law are doing it, he becomes really jealous...
uuugh, something like that...
| moutonshot chapter 3 . 7/5/2014
"If we're gonna fucking do this, you're gonna call me by my name," he murmurs, no heat at all behind his words, and Law sees no reason not to oblige him.
"As you wish. Sanji," he adds, and Sanji chuckles against his neck.
Asdfjklsksjhdlah this line nearly killed me! Law calling Sanji by the name... Trafalgar Law is calling Sanji by the name. The name. *faints* Anyway I'd like to appreciate Robin for being able to coax things out of this rather secretive doctor. Even he told her he kissed Sanji! Robin, I envy you.. And I like it when Law and Sanji talked about their ages and somwhow they just don't give a second thought about it yeayy Thankyou very much for this chapter, so good!
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
Ugh! It's so cute and that comment about Law being an errand boy...Is giving me ideas.
| Kiarene chapter 3 . 6/21/2014
Law/Sanji is my new fav pairing... )
| Snowflake97 chapter 3 . 6/20/2014
It was a lovely story. Seriously you write the best Law/Sanji stories ever! And I am hopefully waiting for the epilogue...So update please?
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/20/2014
That was so wonderful :3 Sanji's acceptance made things move so quickly and smoothly that I'm kinda sad to see this end! Not that I'm sad to see that he made his mind up so quickly! I like my happy endings :D And I suppose with this pairing so closely tied to canon setting, the most beautiful but also disheartening thing is that their happiness, no matter how pure and potent, only lasts for so long (I mean, as several of your stories have pointed out, the alliance will most likely end after a certain length of time, leaving the two no choice but to go their separate ways) :( At least it was very much enjoyed whilst their relationship lasted. :3
And for me, I guess the most beautiful thing of this story (that pertains to the inevitable expiry of their relationship), especially this chapter, was that there's no hesitation or restraint, just impulses like "XXX wanted to kiss him, so he did". Just shows how much they're aware of their time limit subconsciously :D
| nattsubihanabi chapter 3 . 6/16/2014
*raise both hands up* epilogue please!
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 3 . 6/15/2014
It's ok to end it here, but I wouldn't mind a lemon...
| misha-usa chapter 3 . 6/15/2014
You even asking? Please, that epilogue would be so MUCH welcomed!
Those appart, I enjoyed the story this far and totally liked how you directed the characters intercourse. It was a nice development and you've done such a good job :) Thankyou for sharing
| Innocent Law chapter 3 . 6/15/2014
I would love if you added another chapter. especially if it was M-rated, hehe. This was really well written by the way. I enjoyed reading a story with little to no grammar mistakes.
| Kiza Kurosaki chapter 3 . 6/15/2014
Yes please do! Again thank you so much for this story! It's fantastic and I loved it! Thank you so much! :)
| moutonshot chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
I always love your Law Sanji even from Panacea. Your Law is soooo Law I mean those formal words he use for speaking and all. I like how he insist about not getting much excited when it comes to sex but well nobody resists Sanji you know *laughslaugh* Sanji clinging to Law like a spoiled little he was is verrry cute. Make up the kiss you blondie 'cause you certainly won't regret anything coming from this hot doctor! Thankyou so much for this chapter. Keep the Law Sanji stories roll on! I'm a big fan, senpai! *grins*
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
Beautiful as always! Great flow and your words are so eloquent - your writing is amazing!
Greatest part was when Sanji started to admit that being with men could also be an option :3 He's so freaking adorable, especially with a flustered and embarrassed face :3
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 2 . 6/13/2014
Poor Law, the least Sanji can do is give him a kiss.