|Reviews for Father of the Key|
| Kaiba1288 chapter 4 . 6/27
Hi, just wanted to let you know that I think this is a good story and I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story when ever you decide to continue it.
Hiei J Kaiba
| Silver1 chapter 4 . 6/13
I really love this! So do you have any hints as to who will be wife #2 for Harry? Will Dawn be going to Hogwarts? Will Glory show up/Is Dawn the Key? Those are my questions that I fear will never be answered. I know you put your stories on hiatus, but that was 2 years ago! Have you stopped writing or are you posting elsewhere? I hope to see this updated/finished soon.
| strivengoddess chapter 3 . 5/14
so its creepy that Joyce had sex with a teenager, I'm put off by that for sure. but I don't understand why he would need a second wife, couldn't he just have two children to take on the house titles?
also with OZ being there I am guessing that they are still in high school? however, They are acting a bit more like 5th season with how they reacted with everything at times. If dawn has magic will she be able to go to a magical school?
Its not clear who is alive or not, and its also not clear on what the story is following, do we see dawn growing into her powers? or Harry dealing with glory? So many questions lol, I hope you come back and finish this work.
Thanks for posting and leaving up what you have finished.
| SnarryLover91 chapter 4 . 3/16
I so hope you come back to this story soon. I would love to read more.
| WhiteElfElder chapter 4 . 11/24/2016
This was starting up very nicely. Have to wonder if Joyce will be Mrs. Black?
| otakumick chapter 4 . 8/27/2016
This is a rather enjoyable story, I hope you will continue it.
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| beatboxpanda chapter 4 . 7/7/2016
Loved it can't wait for more
| Anariel Phoenix Blade chapter 4 . 7/4/2016
Great story so far. I hope you get the problems with your system fixed soon so you can return to writing.
| Zela3 chapter 4 . 6/27/2016
Ok. So I just found this story and I have to ask if it's on a permanent hiatus or if you plan to continue it as I would really like to know what happens next! Also since Harry has mentioned that he has to marry someone else anyway (for the black lordship) couldn't he still marry Joyce? Just curious since he implied that he couldn't because of his marriage to Hermione...oh and does Dawn have wizard/witch magic (aka core magic) or is she a squib?
| Umbra.Venator chapter 4 . 4/18/2016
pretty cool concept so far :)
| lancelot.knight chapter 4 . 3/29/2016
you really need to update this awesome story! ( I hope that the whole core magic thing can later be a run into stargate sg1 and the ancients lol)
| PegasusShadow chapter 4 . 3/5/2016
Good story please update soon
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 3 . 2/15/2016
I like it! **