No worries :) I look forward to someday seeing a version of this in print (the suspense will surely kill me). ;)

I wouldn't mind seeing it. I don't think you'd need to be making too many edits to it, to make it an independent story. All you'd need to do is alter any references to Autobots and Optimus.

Whoa... are there more chapters coming? This is totally awesome!

Trapped between known danger and the purely unknown. . .
It looks like your hero here is in for a rough time of it.

Orion Hecatson sends wishes of good fortune, and hopes to meet in battle!

Hmm... interesting so far.

whoa great job on this hope you win

Oh, this is really interesting. Good luck, fellow competitor, and I hope to face off against you!