Loved the writing. The Story was Interesting. I think it could have been a Better Original Novel rather then a Fanfic with comes changes.

Great Work. Thank you for this. I had a good time.

best game of throness fanfic thanks for written the story

Cersei with Eddard?! GG.

Thank you it was a fun story to read!

This story would be far better without all the pointless smut. Worst case it would have been appreciated if you added smut sections so it could be skipped without missing any of the actual story. Instead like every other paragraph there is some trash that doesn’t move the story along at all. We know they have sex please move on already

Esta historia es maravillosa, no quería que acabará nunca, tiene un realismo mágico que logra hacerte parte de la historia, felicidades por escribir tan magníficamente, te deseo éxito en todo lo que hagas.

The North should have got consessions from the Targs. They should have asked for a Dornish deal: semi-sovereignty, lower taxes, special titles, and a place at court should they ask for it. They also should have demanded not only the fulfillment of the Pact of Ice and Fire, but a second one as well. Lastly, they should have demanded food and medicine be sold to them at a fair price, not those outrageous ones the Southern kingdoms have been extorting them with.

I never relly liked the 3 eyed raven plot line

Bravo sir! Might have to change my name after that! Great story, enjoyable read!

great job

good story thank you for the hard work you put into it.

Except Jon/Dany, the story is good.

Ned returns with Jon 6 months after he Weds Cersei and is accused of breaking his oath... why don't you do the fucking math again.

Good writing overall nice taking the characters somewhere they normally would not head perse. I give it a 7.8/10. GG

Great rather have Jon with Myrcella.