Reviews for Kha'ir
cara9001 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Wonderful story, I love it! I hope I'll get to read more of it soon XD
SaiyanAngel01 chapter 1 . 2/5/2003
yay! me likey, me likey lotz! hahaha i love the flash backs _ veggie was so ..well..sweet..he not now no,...but i love him anyway. me maked sure to read da sequal (i can't spell) peace,and love from TEXAS! YE-HAW...**grin**
Lully chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
I really thought this was lovely...very sweet. Do wonder how Goku lost his memory here since it is AU.

Love the interaction between the timid princling and the wild boy.
baehwa chapter 1 . 12/13/2002
WEEEE! I LOVE THIS STORY! *huggles story* CONTINUE! .
Furavia-chan chapter 1 . 11/10/2002
Hi! Great story really!

I like it so much that I'd put it's link in my favorites, waiting for the sequel. You will do it, don't you? Please!

I agree to one of the reviewers who said you could do it by Goku's POV after the "figure it out by himself..."

Big kisses from Brazil... and forgive my english, I don't practice too much. hehe
skye chapter 1 . 11/9/2002
not bad i guess...first DBZ eh? i do not wish to be gutted with a pink plastic party knife. i will be nice. i have not read the manga or watched the anime so there's not much i can say, but as a story in itself i think its good!
Chuquita chapter 1 . 11/2/2002
Aww, I liked this fic! Heh-heh, you did a good job. Enjoyed the flashbacks with the chibi Veggie & Chibi Goku. ::nods:: Hope you write more stuff!
Callisto Firestarter chapter 1 . 11/2/2002
You know what? YOU SHOULD MAKE A SEQUAL! YES A SEQUAL! I liked his very much! And maybe do it from Kakays point of view! like from the beginning to what he thinks after Vegeta says:

“And, of course, only pureblood Saiyans can properly perform the Kha’ir ritual…” I say quietly then leave him to figure it out himself.

; I hope you do it!
DarkSerapha chapter 1 . 11/2/2002
Good idea very originally nicely written MORE?

Quick update long chapters more Goku and Geta One very happy me! :o)))

I LIKE it!
Saiko Senshi chapter 1 . 11/2/2002
awww, I think this is realy Kawaii! Would you please please make a sequel? this is just so cute!

xxx steph
Kiarene chapter 1 . 11/2/2002
very nicely written! *nods* different certainly and heart-wrenching...