| Reviews for The Drop |
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   Jonesn chapter 11 . 12/22/2019 Ok friend, time to update, please ... Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. |
| Jonesn chapter 9 . 12/22/2019 80s movie villain haha |
| Lou chapter 11 . 9/19/2019 Holy shit This was AMAZING loved it Cried my eyes out |
| Mary chapter 11 . 8/26/2019 Thank you Lola for this story, I come back from time to time to read it all over again. Thank you for your writing magic. Love, Mary |
| Mary chapter 10 . 8/26/2019 Broken heart, full of life, day to day problems, and dead. Thank you |
| Mary chapter 9 . 8/26/2019 Bella is so brave. I just love her. The end of this chapter with Bella telling Alice about Ben, I can picture it so good in my head. I miss more Emmet moments with the girls, just to see them interact. I would like to read a whole book on these characters. I love the story. Thank you |
| Mary chapter 8 . 8/26/2019 Crazy about each others 3 |
| Mary chapter 7 . 8/26/2019 When you described the part were Rosalie is telling her story about the last year, and how as much as people can yell you to cheer up, move on... Until you don't feel it in your heart is not happening. Thank you for the honesty in this story. For building such a real characters, with their own flaws and broken pieces, supporting each others. Thank you |
| Mary chapter 6 . 8/26/2019 Ben owning the place, Edward just around Bella 3. Ben and Edward 3 and Jasper... Who does not miss their first love? Edward and Bella's attraction mixed with honesty and openness while they get to know each other differently, that is so beautiful, so young and free, and so deep as well. Thank you for this story, for sharing it. |
| Mary chapter 5 . 8/26/2019 Bella pulling back all the pieces. Even better, Jasper connecting everybody again. The most broken and lost kid, the one that needs everybody to be fine. His words about not remembering anything sound so devastating. I want to read more Rose-Bella interactions. I'm sure they make an amazing pair. This story is so bare that it hugs your heart, it makes me cry and smile all at once. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/26/2019 Its just funny how wreck-less we are as teenager. We feel, we owe the world and we are so overwhelmed by everything. You can tell how close Edward is to Ben, and to his family, and how he is connecting with Bella as well, for real. I can imagine how hard must have been for him, getting to know a little bit his family situation, when Ben died and the Swans left. 3 Thank you |
| Mary chapter 3 . 8/26/2019 You are so good for the angst. I love Alice, being such a great friend, you want to have it with you all the time. I just want to be friends with Alice. Bella and her ways were not the best, but at the same time you do understand why. She is so strong and so loving. Everybody is so open in front of the tragedy. I love this story. Thank you! |
| Mary chapter 2 . 8/26/2019 OMG cannot believe thats the first scene we get from Bella and Edward LOL. The way you described them, makes it so real. I love the relationship between Ben and Bella, you can tell how close they are. It melts your heart, it gives you goosebumps and blushed like Bella, it makes me go back to my early teens. Thank you |
| Mary chapter 1 . 8/26/2019 This chapter it's such an amazing introduction into this story and these characters. It gets you hooked so quickly, and you just wants to know them better and whats the story behind and ahead. Thank you |
| Krissy1414 chapter 11 . 5/23/2019 Please please please finish this story! I absolutely love it and have read it several times and I am just dying to know what else happens! |