Reviews for The Drop |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story made my heart ache. I also lost my brother and was left an only child with grieving parents, thankfully, much older than Bella. But it is a terrible loss that grabs you by the throat at unexpected times -and heart. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic chapter! Beautifully written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update. Lots of heart ache still. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAHHHHHH that chapter was everything! So healthy and healing for all of them. Just beautiful and so satisfying after all of their trauma. Thank you! Katy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter. It was nice to see the crew having some fun, and giving Jasper some love. Im so glad Bella and Angela worked things out. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everyone just trying to come to terms with an unimaginable situation, all in different ways. Bella bringing these two groups together that need one another is beautiful. She has Ben’s best qualities. Great chapter. Hopeful. Going back to read again. Thank you for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that's what Ben meant when he told Edward everything would be okay. He intended to make it okay. He just never got the chance. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a big step for Bella to apologize to Angela, but Angela could have sought out Bella, too, to explain and apologize for lying. Not much of a friendship after all. And yes, west side Bella is more perceptive. I like how she sees what Jasper needs and acts on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad Bella was willing to offer a second chance to Angela, even if they are never as close as they were before. Living with that animosity would eat away at them if they didn't. And, Bella's understanding with Jasper was lovely. Thanks! Sally |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...another update! Love watching the development of Bella's character...from an entitled brat to a caring, compassionate young lady who is like the glue that holds them all together. Being there for Jasper as reality hits him hard, encouraging Alice to believe in giving people multiple chances, and apologizing to Angela were great moments. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ben had such an impact on so many lives. He broke some hearts, including his sister's. But they all seem to be moving forward, away from that past that included her brother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Givin' 2nd, 3rd, 4th or more chances frees the soul of the giver, not necessarily the forgiven if they don't feel like they deserve it. Angela certainly deserved it, as did Bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad Bella apologised to Angela - the growth of these characters is lovely to see. Especially Jasper. Thank you for updating again! |
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