|Reviews for The Twins of Rome|
| Trife chapter 5 . 7/8
Wait, how old are the twins at this point? You’ve had two contradictions on their age so far. At one point they were around 4 or 5? Then you called them juveniles shortly after that meaning they are at least 13 years old.
If the boys are at least 13 at this point and fighting the Minotaur then I can see them having a chance at fighting it if they had help, which they didn’t as you made the guards nothing more than pointless and rather useless wall decorations leaving the fighting to two kids that, honestly, shouldn’t have won that.
To back this statement up I reference the run in Percy had with his first Minotaur.
If the boys are four years old and did this then that’s just more then suspension of disbelief could even cover, demigods or not.
| Reaperofolympus chapter 7 . 6/26
Such great stroywrtiting?
| wondersofcath chapter 26 . 6/18
this is a damn good story and i really love it. i hope you could pick this story back up because its brilliant. i really cant wait to know what would happen next. there's just so much to this story that makes me love it. it might be hard to get back to it since its been years from the last update but i hope you will. good luck and stay brilliant
| Firestorm337 chapter 26 . 6/15
Daaaaamn son, this shit is getting heavy
| Its JustICE chapter 26 . 5/15
fuckfuck holyyyy cow ! I stumbled upon your story and read it within the day! And may I just say it is amazing! my only regret is not discovering it sooner. The writing, pacing is perfect. The shifting of POV and describing the scenery so good! By far it's my favorite preyna fic. I hope you continue this soon because damn it's good
| JustAnotherPJOFangirl chapter 26 . 4/27
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/28
Please update I need this to leave
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/25
Love your story and I really hope your still working on it. Your ideas are brilliant and if your not updating this one I’m still able to read your other stories which I also love so it’s not a disaster. I like the idea of calypso and I’m worried about Cassie. I especially love the Percy and Jason are twins idea and I hope You are still writing this story
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/13
I’ve read this story a few time before and whenever you are able to update, please do. I’m looking forward to reading when the Greeks come to Camp Juniper.
| Maximusowrath chapter 26 . 3/1
Please pick this story back up
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/13
| Kalien040401 chapter 26 . 12/11/2017
I love it.
| herec0mesthesun chapter 26 . 12/3/2017
Hi, I just wanted to say even though it has been almost 2 years since this story was updated it is still my favorite percy jackson one to date as well as the only story I have kept that has not been updated in so long. I know this is super stressful to be a writer and need to compensate for fans of your storys, and I am not pleading for this story to update. I only want some sort of answer on how this story is doing and your thoughts. I know this story has been put off for years and is probably hard for you to remeber what your plans were for it and I hope you continue, I really do, but I do not want to be annoying and beg for you to add on. I want you to know people still care about this story and are and can be willing to help you along if your struggling. Thank you for reading this super long, most likly filled with errors reveiw. Good luck.
| Spartan b322 chapter 26 . 11/25/2017
| I want more chapter 26 . 11/6/2017
Your storyline is interesting, your detaills are refined, your pace isn't too rushed and Percy isn't too op
BUT you take wayyyy too long to update
Please update faster next time