Reviews for In Times of Peace
meantimegirl chapter 2 . 6/18/2014
Oh I miss the sand siblings.
Anautumnlady chapter 2 . 6/18/2014
I haven't seen a story so good in a long time, and I really, really love it so far...I can't wait for the next chapters!
hoyaku chapter 2 . 6/18/2014
This is really fantastic. I love the way you portray Sakura and Sasuke.

Can't wait for the next update!
aite chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
This is addicting! Really, please update soon!
aite chapter 2 . 6/18/2014
It's so good and yet so short! I'm craving for more! I love how this story does not take the common 'sex at an inn' or 'sakura is a virgin, sasuke is not'. This is something new for me. Very, very interesting. I like the pace; not too fast :)

Hope you update soon!
Archades chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
I'm really liking this so far. Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
Corn Dog8 chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
Ok. Wow... What to say?

First of all, this is a lovely start to your story. :) I think I really like the twist you've added to this story.(It's not often that Sakura ever has any relationship with other men besides Sasuke) XD

I truly enjoyed the parts you added about Naruto, Hinata and the Leaf Village in general. This had give more context to help us better understand the story and has created a greater depth to this story. Nice Job!

However, I think it would be helpful if you added more emotions between Sakura and Sasuke. This is the part I really wanted more of. Maybe describe facial expressions, tone of voice and body signals.( tense, relaxed, stiff etc.) I am looking forward to the romance and fluff! :DDD

Please keep writing, I love the story so far..
Freud chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
I think the whole point of Taro not being introduced is because the point is he's not important enough to be. Giving more info on him would make him more significant. The story has some rough edges and some parts are really well written-I like your style, but some parts are very shallow.
literallyeveryusernameistaken5 chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Great story. Please update soon and thanks for the latest chapter.
meantimegirl chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
I'm so excited for this.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
This is a good story! Please update soon :)
Delione chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
Wow! I really like this story! So different from others I have read, usualy it will be sasuke sleeping around! Hope u will continue and update soon!
yo123 chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
keep it up story is great!
Athrna chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
You may want to change your story telling into past tense from present tense. It usually is. There are quite a lot of missing words in the middle of your sentences.

The idea of Sakura living a modern life and actively have a sex life is fine. But that bit was in fact the least enjoyable of your creation to read in my opinion. Firstly, I think you should introduce this 'Taro' for our understanding. He's not in the canon, is he? If he is, I beg your pardon.

Your description is pretty good, actually. It's a fair starting point.
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