good story

This is honestly the best fanfiction i have ever read! I cant wait to read the rest of the series!

Ah man, please stop making Dumbledore EVIL!
That fanfic trope has been done to DEATH

great, now for the next one

Really interesting characterization. The habits of survival in an abusive family can seem strange from the outside, but to the victim they seem like normal life

Her name is Lily Moon. I thought you made a typo but im starting to think you actually think her name is lil

Like i get you want to present dumbledore as a manipulator but at least have him come up with a ‘grand plan’ that doesnt sound like it was conceived by an ape. If you cant add intelligence and cunning then maybe just focus on something else.

Really enjoyed this story. I know the changes were minor for this first entry, but I look forward to the butterfly effect they take you and the story on. Looking forward to continuing the story. Well done and thanks for sharing!

So, I’ve not read this one for a while and can’t remember much of the story line, but I remember enjoying it. I saw a lot of rude reviews and just wanted to tell you, you wrote an awesome story, and you were creating, and you actually committed to finishing your story, and progress comes from practice. To all the naysayers and grammar nazis, it costs anywhere between 700-1,500.00 or higher to write a damn book. I don’t know if you noticed, but this site is called FANfiction. Sorry to people who just wanted to see a review on the story, I’ll hop off my high horse now.

Loved it

A very enjoyable first instalment.

It’s good!

Dumbles needs a kick up the backside, all the way from Land's End to John O'Groats!

Thank you for your creativity of this story. I look forward to reading the rest of the series.

Thanks for a great (re)read!