Reviews for At His Command
BishPlease23 chapter 10 . 12/18/2017
jk chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
so this is just a cheap knock off of fifty shades of grey with the twilight characters? stupid
Sabella Rose chapter 6 . 11/2/2016
Not the princess thing
noflowers chapter 3 . 8/27/2016
I have only read two chapters, but I am already disappointed the story is unfinished...
jk chapter 7 . 1/13/2016
I'm confused rose says can you just be his sub while hes romantically involved with someone else? confused cause why would he cheat on his girlfriend with bella? so he does use bdsm as a excuse to be a whore! I knew it. Would the girlfriend know about bella? if she agrees to be his sub can he have more subs then her? how many girls can he collar at once? do they all know about each other? is this normal behavior for him? hes been in four long term relationships...whether they were just sex or romantic remains to be seen...was he faithful to them/? He said he was with four subs for 2 years each...that's al long time for just using someones body without often did he do scenes with other people? did he only break up with them cause he found something better in someone else? was he bored with them? I need details so I can judge his level of nastiness
jk chapter 4 . 1/13/2016
were all supposed to think that Edwards not a skank cause hes only had four subs...but remember that's just the ones hes doesn't count all the chicks hes been with...all the "scenes" hes done to "test" them out. bdsm is really just an excuse to be a whore
Gubefan1980 chapter 3 . 11/7/2015
This is good. Someone accused of basically ripping off Fifty Shades of Grey. Your writing is much better that EL James. I actually read beyond this chapter to where Edward fucked her upstairs in the club and then she snuck out of her apartment to meet Edward. I am really more of a fan of slash specifically Edward and Jasper. You seem to have a better handle on the BDSM community that Icy did. Can't imagine anyone writing something about which she has no knowledge and getting some things so wrong. To the point of insisting that Bella say "stop" instead of "red" I know someone who is in that community and she said "they" hate the books they are so clueless. Ho hum how stupid and all the fangirls fanning themselves l
AMELIA.D.HATHAWAY chapter 10 . 10/2/2015
pls continue
Guest chapter 2 . 9/15/2015
you ask "well" at the end of the chapter...what are we supposed to say? you copied 50 shades of grey using twilight characters...stupid
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2015
Barb chapter 10 . 6/4/2015
please let us know if you are ever going to update, or if you just decided to stop all together.
jk chapter 10 . 6/1/2015
I think edwads just a controlling prick call it what you want
jk chapter 6 . 5/31/2015
ya they know what they it being free or whatever but doms have fucking issues...I own you? I own your soul?
yup deep seeded issues
jk chapter 3 . 5/31/2015
so Edwards been a skank for11 years huh...I wonder many "scenes" he went through to find those subs...ewwww
KDMCAM chapter 10 . 3/6/2015
I thought I had found an extra chapter here but I hadn't. ;( I hope you come ack to this soon!
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