Reviews for The Invincible
Arciam chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Sweet
takuya chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
that was incredible i loved it tons
twincast chapter 1 . 3/2/2003
*feels all warm inside* very sweet!
Too Short chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
Good story but one problem.

You need to make it longer!
Too Short chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
Good story but one problem.

You need to make it longer!
Too Short chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
Good story but one problem.

You need to make it longer!
lecada chan chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
awww...that's so sweet! and the typical reactions from the rest of them...*grins* well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
Umm...Is that it? Where is the rest?
suddenly apples chapter 1 . 11/6/2002
*snickers* and yes, i think you came across very well with strong imagery. and i especially love the phrase "reincarnation of a hero long gone" it sounds so cool! anyway, yeah *waves a daiken flag*
Nine1 chapter 1 . 11/4/2002
Soooo cuuuuute! Heh, the others' reactions...it's been a while, huh? Missed you! (Who else makes me choke on fluff with a stupid grin on my face as well as you can?) Hope you write more soon! I'll be looking out for you.
Angel of Peace chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
ack! So cute!
that is secret chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
There, there, cry not. *hands Kat a tissue*
Lula chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
That was sooo sweet! Very good.
Only Leigh chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
Cyuuutttte *_* your writing is awsome!