Reviews for Early Discovery
Guest chapter 7 . 1/6
Either the Humans in your story are retarded or the Salarians are in possession of super powers. How the actual hell did a Salarian, with no actual dedicated hacking tools or an adequete knowledge of Human programming and security systems managed to somehow remotely hack into not just any old database but an isolated, incredibly heavily encrypted MILITARY database. Not only this but he did so completely undetected and then managed to download and otherwise steal the plans for a highly secretive weapon and then escape undetected?! Congratulations on completely destroying my interest in this story with such a stupid plot line
Pteaset chapter 17 . 1/4
I have bought sci-fi books that do not to pick a space battle as well as you have just done I was riveted on the edge of my seat whenever hack it saved the fleet I cheered you sir have talent
Pteaset chapter 14 . 1/3
I love the way you write anderson most of the stories either talk about how good he is but never say it or just actually don’t talk about it at all it’s nice to actually get to see anderson kick some ass
Pteaset chapter 11 . 1/3
This story is so good every chapter gets better and better
Pteaset chapter 7 . 1/3
I have probably read 100 different mass affect fanfiction’s this is one of my favorite some stories move along to quickly some stories dwell on everything and blow out the size of the text both detract from the story you hit that sweet spot in the middle perfectly
Pteaset chapter 5 . 1/3
Love it so good
Pteaset chapter 2 . 1/3
Another wonderful chapter I really like that you added it I feel like most stories just skip over this
Pteaset chapter 1 . 1/3
I was reading your other story and I kind of didn’t get whether were already quarter ends there and then I realized it was the sequel LOL so now I’m starting the first one
Greatazuredragon chapter 26 . 9/24/2017
Very nice story, good work.
Trace Reading chapter 8 . 9/3/2017
It's called a shipyard, not a construction station. Being in space will not change this.
jgkitarel chapter 2 . 8/4/2017
A good few questions asked, which are the crux of the matter. And basing his revelation on a bible passage that didn't say we were the Special Snowflake? Nice. Too many think that religion can't reconcile such a possibility when it can. It's PEOPLE who have to reconcile truths.
roseman780 chapter 27 . 8/4/2017
I truly loved the story. My only complaint would be Shepard's first name. You had him called James, Julien, and finally John. Unless there were three different Shepards and I just missed it.
talon2007 chapter 27 . 5/27/2017
that was great
codythedude chapter 23 . 5/11/2017
Loving this story so far. I noticed a plot hole though. You mentioned almost 40,000 turian POWs at the end of the Shanxi arc, but nothing else has been said about them.
mistbornlax chapter 2 . 4/20/2017
Ok, I've got to ask: Are you religious? (Or: Why did you have to bring god into this?)

Just to clarify this: I myself am not a believer (so if you are one you'd most likely call me an heathen or a heretic or something like that...I prefer the label: Atheist), that's why I am asking!
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