Obsessed! Please update!

Yay now we need an update this is so good

I love this story. Would you mind if I use your plot? Please contact me if I can use it or not. If might be best you e-mail me my is

i really like this story and hope you update soon please. oh and a suggestion can liam and Neville be together as a paring i think it would be really cute!

OMG! I love Harry. He is so sweet, I think I got a toothache. I'm glad you didn't make Liam a magical Dudley. Love the bond between him and Liam. The mate thing also made sense. I like what you did with the auras, and I love Neville. Dumbledick can go to hell if he even tries to touch Harry. Please continue this story as I think it is a refreshing take on the WBWL idea. Also could you do a chapter where Neville and Liam braid his hair and have a sleepover? I would also like to see him meet Draco or another Slytherin, but you don't have to. This story is awesome and I can't wait to read more. Please send dumbledick to Azkaban. Also can you have someone call him that name? I would be forever in your debt.

OMG! I love Harry. He is so sweet, I think I got a toothache. His brother wasnta

Please update! This one or Their Beloved Prince. Love them both!

Starting to reread again :D please update soon or well as long as there is a plan for an update and the fic isn't forgotten because I loooove it! And I agree with one of the comments, a crature inheritance like a Neko or sth affectionate could maybe help a bit. Hope to see a new chap in the hopefully near future xD

I only just found this story and it is really good. I don't usually tend to read books/ fanfics like this, but the description intrigued me and I haven't been able to stop reading since. Please may you continue it? Of course don't feel pressured, I just think that it is beautiful and really well written. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece, It is awesome. Again thank you. xx
NEVER stop writing you have a talent. x

HI!
I'm french (so sorry for my very bad english) and i've just finished to read the translation elrika has made of your story.
Just to tell you i love your story. I hope you will publish soon the followings chapters.
Thanks for the story.

Please muse, return & help the author finish this brilliant story. It's 4:00 AM & I just read the last posted chapter. Had to clean my glasses repeatedly due to tears. Someday

i think he should get a creature inheritance. would help a lot with him being ok with mating with Bill and Charlie. I know this has not been updated in a long time but i thought i would put my 2 cents worth in.

Honestly loving the way Liam is portrayed in this story, usually you have the wbwl being arrogant or being an asshole, but he's so warm and caring and he just wants to help his brother so much. I really like it. The abuse is way too graphic for my delicate sensibilities, but I braved through the stark reality that all of it is actually real and happening to children all around the world. Dumbledore is an ass, I hate him. James and Lily are misguided and wrong but I think they should get a chance to redeem themselves. I will finish reading this if you update again, but I need to recover from the harsh reality that has been thrown in my face. I read the warnings in the summary, love the book and the detail, no bashing, but I need a break.

PLEASE UPDATE THIS, I LOVE IT AND WANT TO SEE MORE!

To anwser your question, I don’t think Harry needs a creature inheritance, however if you did, I think it’d be interesting to come up with a new, or at least very uncommon, creature. Maybe just something you don’t see frequently. Like: fae, faerie, nymph, hulder, some for of angel or elf, elemental, shifter, etc.

The key thing to remember is that both Harry and Liam would likely inherit the same creature, which you would be able to do something fun with dark and light with angels or elfves or something like that. I’d also like to see Liam’s mate explored through that too. Whether it’s Neville, Ron, Hermonie, one of the twins, Draco, heck- Severus even. Or some entirely original character. You could do something where Harry is Liam’s soul mate in an entirely platonic way, or is a soul mate of Bill or Charlie. I don’t know, but I feel like there a lot to explore.

(At the very least, instead of a creature inheritance, you could still do something like a magical inheritance or some kind of boost wizards and witches get at sixteen. )

Anyway, hope that helped! I look forward to what route you end up taking!