Horrible. I'm crying for this

The dementor's kiss? No! They deserve to die between cruciatus and any hideous dark spell! I'm going to throw up, really. The worst thing is that this happens in the real world. It's disgusting how people can take the innocence out of a child.

It's horrifying. I can't believe how much evil there is in the world. Lily didn't even ask her sister if she wanted to keep the baby and those Dursleys treated him like he was nobody.

I can't believe what I'm reading! How can there be such unpleasant parents? How could they be so selfish? And leave it with the Dursleys of all people. I dont give credit.
Hello! I loved this first chapter!

ugh the story Is so sad, the onions keep bugging my eyes

Finde die geschichte sehr gut und würde mich freuen sie weiter zu verfolgen. Was ist AO3?

No, you change end it here! You have too many loose ends to the up. Charlie and Bill"a bond, how do they finally come together and bond. Singapore's single short sighted attitude, he's as blind as Harry's parents but for different reasons though they boil down to self serving pride. How does Tom Riddle come back into magic without assuming Lord Voldermort's darkness to the extreme. How do the Deadly twins for into this, you reference them as being like Charlie and Bill but don't really get into details, yet they seem to be important to your story. If you finish the story would be making this into a mpreg?
You've brought quite the plot line to the table and obviously started out with a goal. Yes your spelling and grammar needs work. Mainly you need to read your lines out loud, if they don't make sense to you, they won't to us either. Then put it through grammar check to correct the middle words that although spell check may say they are okay, your grammar check will be lighting up like a Christmas tree. Don't ruin a really good story with an inattention to detail, how else will you progress as a writer?

love the story.
please be more soon.
please update the remake on ao3 soon.

please write more soon.

Can’t wait till you post another chapter
I’m not the edge of my seat

I love it so far, I would love to be able to keep up with it

Pleeeeeaaaaasssssee? Any moooooorrrrreee

When are you update time story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

sad to hear that, as I can never find the storys on that site. Just don't know how to I gess, the filters are confusing and never work like I want.

Bugger it’s been moved over when it was getting good.