Stunning story - very well written and has very clear ... imagery (right word?) made me cry a couple times but I absolutely love the story - wonder what Voldie will do now though... i might be wrong but didnt u say that sev was found out as a spy? confused

this story is really sad but also very well written, i love it.

Omg!interesting story! Hatinf dumbles and adult potters. Liam is a good brotge. Seems tom still lives witin voldit. Update and write on!

you better write more, I near cried when harry was soooo terrified of the bed.

UPDATE SOON!

Awesome start of story!

This made me so sad how bad off Harry is, you have written it brutally clearly and while I am horrified for his character I am desperate to find out what happens next...I have always thought the mark of a good story was getting your audience to think your characters were real, not some cardboard cutout and you have done that! I'm becoming a huge fan of your work :)

Oh, oh, oh. I was trying to figure out how you were going to get the three together and now I know and it's awesome and makes sense and is awesome. And I love how an arrest warrant has been issued because the Potter's deserve it and you're amazing!

I'm glad that Liam went to the same shop Harry used as it kind of gives him an insight into Harry's life. I love/hate how they found Harry. It was a brilliant way to find him but at the same time so sad (didn't cry this time though). I love(I need to find another word) Bill's reaction to killing the man.

This is just wow. I love this chapter, my favourite so far. You are amazing at creating visual pictures and almost had me in tears again(this is getting to be a problem, but don't stop being an amazing author. I'm sure I'll run out of tears eventually). I love the picture of Harry or Shade's life. It's just amazing and I love your grocery shop woman and the ideas about the colours. I've been trying to figure out Shade was able to see and the colours just blew my expectations away. I love the safe people thing as well, blue makes so more sense for that as it's a calming colour where red is associated with anger and bad stuff which you probably already know so I don't know why I'm telling you. Oh, and I love your Snape so far even though he's not actually in this chapter.

Right, I just stop crying from the last chapter then you hit me with this one? This is another amazing chapter. I can completely sympathise with Liam throwing up. I love Moody's reaction to Liam's declaration of going "To look for my brother."

This chapter pretty much brought me to tears. Your description is amazing. It's not to much detail but enough to imagine what's happening and I love the thing you did with Alice imagining Neville. I also love Liam's reaction and I completely agree with your take on magical twins.

I love this chapter. It's a really good beginning and pulls you into the story. I love how Frank and Alice aren't insane! Dumbledore's confusion and I have no idea what the word is but his 'I can't do anything wrong' attitude is hilarious as well. I look forward to reading the rest of your fanfic.

...confused... you had in previous chapter that Sev was found out for being a spy... so was that a bit of misdirection on your part? (if so you are devious)
i did have a little laugh at your author's note saying you were going to try to have a good Dumbles, but that's out the window in this chapter...
just please i beg you don't have him be a perv.
i swear if you didn't give Harry such wonderful mate(s) I would think you didn't like him! Poor Harry...
Roo

awesome!