|Reviews for A Secret Surprise|
| KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Pizza Pie verse! Happy sigh! It truly is a verse you can live inside and wrap up in. Feels so real and so cozy here! Warm and happy and fuzzy inside!
Read it three times! Yep.
It just keeps getting better with each time.
My favorite part... Sam's art work was so sweetly done...with the macaroni and the heart and then writing to Uncle Bobby 'Happy Father's Day!'
and this line...'But now this floppy-haired kid had just cemented that holiday in this old Hunter's heart.'
Whaaaaa! Bobby! 'Cause Bobby is very much a father to them! Indeed!
And Bobby telling Sam he loved him.
Sam asking "And Dean?" Always thinking of and being sure to include his big brother in everything.
This verse is beautifully constructed and something to be very proud of!
Thank you so much for your talent and for your time in sharing!
| skag trendy chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Sooo sweet! I really hope that one day Kripke will consider a series of the boys when they were little, and base it on this.
| CLOWNFISH14 chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Omg that actually made giggle out loud because of how cute it was.
I loved it!
| Frakking Toasters chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
OMG that was adorable. xo
| Mickey12Boo chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
This Story is so adorable I Love it! :D
| mara-isamoose chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
MARIANNA YOU DID IT AGAIN YOU MADE ME CRY. I DIDNT KNOW THIS WAS A FATHERS DAY THING SO SAM MAKING THAT FOR BOBBY JUST BRUTALLY MURDERED MY HEART AND I READ THIS TWO DAYS AGO BUT IM STILL TEARING UP JUST THINKING ABOUT IT. THERE ARE WAY TOO MANY SMALL THINGS I WANT TO POINT OUT BUT IM ON MY PHONE AND CANT REVIEW THE STORY AGAIN OR OTHERWISE YOU WOULD BASICALLY HAVE IT READ BACK WORD FOR WORD BECAUSE LITERALLY EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS WAS PERFECT AND I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND JUST WOW THAT WAS AMAZING. IVE BEEN MISSING THE PIZZA PIE VERSE AND YOU DID NOT DISAPPOINT LIKE BRAVO MAN YOU JUST GOD. THAT WAS AWESOME. THANK YOU
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it.
| Freya922 chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
I love this sweet schmoop! 4 year old Sam is adorable!
| dashipper chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
Hi Marianna! I totally loved the schmoop and little Sam and Uncle Bobby and... LOL.. : ) This is the kind of story where you just sit down and read and you end up feeling so great after a crappy day. Do we get to see what Sam had made for Dean? I'd like to see Bobby hang the picture out where John will see it. Hee hee! I'm not bitter about John, really! Thanks for sharing... _
| Scarlett7 chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
I love this. I love how you write young Sam and Bobby. So incredibly, perfectly in character. You are a master.
| stargazermeri chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
well done this was such a sweet story :)
| SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
| JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
That was so adorable. I really loved how Sam made Bobby a Father's Day card. Very cute!
| Zana Zira chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
The feels, they are killing me with fuzziness! I love this so much. Bobby really is more of a father to these boys than John ever was. I'm so glad they had him around, and I love this 'verse for making their lives a little less awful. ;)
Also, John still sucks. Just sayin'. XP
| SilverShadowWolf46 chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW :) Daddy!Bobby is adorable.