Man I'm really sad this fic is dead. Over a million words, and this story was truly special. I hope it comes back one day

Also, why hasn't Jack gone into the offensive against Jones, Ross and Hock? He should've sent kill teams on these clowns way back when Henry died. Let alone when they conspired to kill his daughter twice.

This hate of Jack is something I'll never comprehend. Julia actually feels angrier that Jack is there helping her than Jones betraying her for the 2nd time. Is this a Christianity thing? Self-flagellation writing technique? Honestly, all this hate of the guy the story revolves around is downing my mood to keep going. I can't even remember a time when someone thank him for something he's done.

I don't know how Jack can talk to Hannah like they are old buddies after all she did to him. She even killed his best friend.

How does it feel, Hannah? How does betrayal feel?

The killing of Henry Lawson and Hannah turning rogue feels strange and out of place but that is life I suppose.

Now I wonder who is this 'Rival' Jack from The Reds?

Rip

Go to get Greg

Interesting story, this muat be great!

Humanity wasn't attacked 6 years early. Canon the war was in 2157 you had it in 2156 so only a year early

Is the Harper family ever going to get any reconciliation? Will the girls figure out they were genetically made to lead the 'revolution' against the Reapers?

Ohhhh I just want the Harper family to be reunited already and Miranda to be the Normandy's XO.

Wait, so the bugs they were fighting were the Rachni?

Oh no! Harris is going to become Saren's replacement.