Reviews for if you break it i'll tell everyone
bookbabe68 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
It's good but you should really be capitalizing the first letter of every sentence, the word "I" and the first letter of people's names. Also, I'm pretty sure there's no position as a "cornerback." I think you mean quarterback.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
:D love it